hansora What a great biography you have, four books already! Seems like I'm going to sink my mind into pro romance work!
Yep, I'll give your book a try.

      _Rockbison_ Hey, I reviewed your story and I honestly loved it since it's a change of pace from what I usually read. Thanks btw for reviewing my work too!

        ZeroX0666
        Sure. But will take some time... I'm a slow reader😅

            Moonwriting
            Thanks for the review. As promised, here is my constructive opinion.

            • If you break the paragraph for dialogue, it would help in easing the reading flow.

            • Some words are input wrongly. e.g grasped instead of gasp. If you need help in minor grammar/spelling, try Grammarly. It's free!

            • Some of your repetitive sentences may be excessive that it might break reading flow. Tbh, I do the same mistake as it is quite addictive for my ear lol.

            • Your story is def a page turner for me eventho im not a fan of fantasy romance.
              Cheers! x

            hansora Hansora

            I doubt you need my constructive opinion considering you're pretty good. But to be fair, I'll share it since I did the same to the others.

            • Yours is well-written. One thing though, it's my first time seeing the term 'my old man' referred to a husband. Nothing wrong here. Just stating.

            • Ngl, i actually can see baby blues and baby pink in my head and "felt" cool breeze as i read all the four chapters you posted. The kinds i normally get when i feel utterly calm and that warm fuzzy feeling.
              Cheers! x

            @ZeroX0666
            Sure, let's review swap!

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