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Hi to you three. Would you like to review swap with me? Let me know, I've got some dark Fantasy male lead novel.
Here's a link if you're interested. Why I (don't) regret looking for the dragon's eyes
September 2021- Review Swap here!
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Mayline_Carraro
Sure.
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Can you review mine too. Plz, read some chapters before reviewing them. Paragraph comment or chapter comment too, I'll do the same.
Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/23519192806324805?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4317688632
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Awesome!
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Mayline_Carraro Wanna swap a review? I'll read a few chapters of your book first before leaving any reviews 
https://www.webnovel.com/book/for-our-happier-path_23723743205572205
@Moonwriting @0Mashroom
_Rockbison_
I've reviewed your books, sorry for the delay because I spent time reading the chapters + working long hours
If anyone wanna have a review swap, please drop me your link
https://www.webnovel.com/book/for-our-happier-path_23723743205572205
hansora What a great biography you have, four books already! Seems like I'm going to sink my mind into pro romance work!
Yep, I'll give your book a try.
Mayline_Carraro Sure thing!
Moonwriting sure, don't forget to do a constructive review on mine. thanks!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/falling-for-his-prisoner_23656071806262805
PerkyPompous_Pixie
Wanna swap a review? Please expect a delay because I tend to read chapters and analyze them before giving my own reviews. You can leave a review after I've done it to your book
https://www.webnovel.com/book/for-our-happier-path_23723743205572205
Mayline_Carraro Hope you'd enjoy them XD
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Moonwriting will wait for your review before I share my constructive opinion with you. Cheers! x
hansora sure. Will begin reading yours shortly.
Hey there if you're interested in review swapping I'm down!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/witch-hunting-love-(gl)_23633916905838105
_Rockbison_ Hey, I reviewed your story and I honestly loved it since it's a change of pace from what I usually read. Thanks btw for reviewing my work too!
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Moonwriting
Yes, added to library. Will try to post it tomorrow.
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Moonwriting
Thanks for the review. As promised, here is my constructive opinion.
If you break the paragraph for dialogue, it would help in easing the reading flow.
Some words are input wrongly. e.g grasped instead of gasp. If you need help in minor grammar/spelling, try Grammarly. It's free!
Some of your repetitive sentences may be excessive that it might break reading flow. Tbh, I do the same mistake as it is quite addictive for my ear lol.
Your story is def a page turner for me eventho im not a fan of fantasy romance.
Cheers! x
hansora Hansora
I doubt you need my constructive opinion considering you're pretty good. But to be fair, I'll share it since I did the same to the others.
Yours is well-written. One thing though, it's my first time seeing the term 'my old man' referred to a husband. Nothing wrong here. Just stating.
Ngl, i actually can see baby blues and baby pink in my head and "felt" cool breeze as i read all the four chapters you posted. The kinds i normally get when i feel utterly calm and that warm fuzzy feeling.
Cheers! x
@ZeroX0666
Sure, let's review swap!
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ZeroX0666 Alright~ Onto yours from now on
PerkyPompous_Pixie Good day. I've been scrolling through your tremendous historical of well-written critics. I'm quite amazed by the time you spend pulling out all of those good point and mistakes, and I'll be interested in your point of view for a swap.
Alas, I am not able to propose you a contemporary romance genre, would you be interested in magic/fantasy instead?
I won't bother you further if you're not interested, instead I'll just wish you a nice day.