i wrote a new book with currently 2 chapters, if anyone could atleast have a read would be nice. A chapter comment, review or whatever would be great.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-devil-promised-me_24098114706129705

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(Sorry for the mention spam, as soon as anyone replies, i will do theirs first.)

    f0011 Hi. I left you a review. I did mention some awkward phrasing in it, but I didn't go into detail because it felt rude to do so in a review. If you want me to leave a comment, or DM me on discord, I'd be happy to give more specific feedback.

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      Just added to collection and reviewed. Cool start. I didn't mention it in the review, but I noticed some issues with comma placement and using dashes. Happy to elaborate if you want!

        Alstash
        I've read your novel and I find Tifon hilarious. I hope you enjoy mine. I'm on my way to review yours now.

          JustGoDie13 ]
          alright thank you so much. I noticed that to, I will make sure to check it double now.

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