@D004

Just added to collection and reviewed. Cool start. I didn't mention it in the review, but I noticed some issues with comma placement and using dashes. Happy to elaborate if you want!

    Alstash
    I've read your novel and I find Tifon hilarious. I hope you enjoy mine. I'm on my way to review yours now.

      JustGoDie13 ]
      alright thank you so much. I noticed that to, I will make sure to check it double now.

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