Demons_and_I Idk if I told you this but I left you a review and everything I don't know if you saw it. I recommend making the first chapter a prologue since it's a huge exposition dump. Jump into the story first leave the exposition there available for if readers want to know the backdrop of the story, this will help with your overall pacing and engagement of the reader. Just my advice anyways here's my novel https://www.webnovel.com/book/a-brother's-strength_24947605205370305

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