@ZeroX0666 ZeroX0666
Thanks for the review. Doubt you need my two-cent opinion since you're pretty good but it would not be fair if I leave you out.
- well-written. Writing style immediately brought me to a drama where camera followed the mc.
- description is beautifully done - not too short n not too elaborate. Enough to be able to visualise.
- Reading flow is very smooth. Def would love to have talent like yours!
- Not familiar with the concept but am i right to assume college is university...? (BSc, BA sorts?) Or is it not since she's a transfer student? Nothing wrong here. just curious if that's a thing in whatever part of the world you're in.
Mayline_Carraro
Done reviewed your book. Will wait for your review before I share my opinion on yours.