Rin_Nurnia
done reviewing your book.
As I posted above, here is my constructive opinion on your book.

  • Tbh, i thought I was reading the wrong book since the first half of the initial chapter did not share the same name as a synopsis. Nothing wrong here, just stating.
  • There is a slight confusion in the first chapter as to who says what. Also when the second half of the second paragraph took a while to register until I finally get what it mean.
  • I didn't expect it to be that dark! The terrifying kinds. So job well done in executing those. So good it creeps me a little.

Tharish99
Done reviewing yours. Will share my constructive opinion on your book after you give an honest review on mine.
Cheers! x

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