Rin_Nurnia
done reviewing your book.
As I posted above, here is my constructive opinion on your book.

  • Tbh, i thought I was reading the wrong book since the first half of the initial chapter did not share the same name as a synopsis. Nothing wrong here, just stating.
  • There is a slight confusion in the first chapter as to who says what. Also when the second half of the second paragraph took a while to register until I finally get what it mean.
  • I didn't expect it to be that dark! The terrifying kinds. So job well done in executing those. So good it creeps me a little.

Tharish99
Done reviewing yours. Will share my constructive opinion on your book after you give an honest review on mine.
Cheers! x

        PerkyPompous_Pixie
        Thanks for you time and wait! I wanted to make things a little proper since you spent some time just writing an entire paragraph

        This contains [spoilers.]

        ->Overall, I'm enjoying this, I love bloody things and I've been served on a silver plate.
        ->Congratulations for making me worry, that's a little rare, I managed to get the plot around Audrey a little quicker than it was written, so the mind-game with the few clues you left behind was awesome.
        ->One of the strongest contrasts I observed was the gentleman's thoughts versus his speech, it fits his appearance more than his attitude lol, but you gave Audrey's point of view by calling him a teddy bear-like person I believe.
        ->Minus point, I still don't know why the heck he hates them so much, I agree with free violence though but it's simply not said yet on your published chapters. I don't like this plot hole because unlike the plot it's not mentioned at all but could finely contrast with what's going on between the two.
        ->Be careful not being too fast with this kind of Beauty and the Beast twisted version. I did saw he wasn't able to call her by her name, which dehumanises her the most in Frederick's house. I need more contrast, just peculiars details to delay the story but can help me understand the alchemy!

           Thanks for your attention, I had a great time reading.

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