PerkyPompous_Pixie
Thanks for you time and wait! I wanted to make things a little proper since you spent some time just writing an entire paragraph
This contains [spoilers.]
->Overall, I'm enjoying this, I love bloody things and I've been served on a silver plate.
->Congratulations for making me worry, that's a little rare, I managed to get the plot around Audrey a little quicker than it was written, so the mind-game with the few clues you left behind was awesome.
->One of the strongest contrasts I observed was the gentleman's thoughts versus his speech, it fits his appearance more than his attitude lol, but you gave Audrey's point of view by calling him a teddy bear-like person I believe.
->Minus point, I still don't know why the heck he hates them so much, I agree with free violence though but it's simply not said yet on your published chapters. I don't like this plot hole because unlike the plot it's not mentioned at all but could finely contrast with what's going on between the two.
->Be careful not being too fast with this kind of Beauty and the Beast twisted version. I did saw he wasn't able to call her by her name, which dehumanises her the most in Frederick's house. I need more contrast, just peculiars details to delay the story but can help me understand the alchemy!
Β Β Β Thanks for your attention, I had a great time reading.