zigginah You wrote that you wanted feedback and criticism on this forum. I gave you just that, there is no anger from my end. If you dont like criticism next time say that you want a fake review. I'm just being real and trying to tell you what's wrong with your story and how to improve it. Again, no hate.
September 2021- Review Swap here!
One chapter novel looking for review swap. Effort put into my review = effort put into your review. Let me know if you want a fake review beforehand.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/abhorrence_21615233606062005
Let's do an honest review + collection swap! Here is my story https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-vengeance-hours_23159921406414405
1AM okay checking yours now and please give a review for my book too 
GMSJakers
Heck yeah! I've been meaning to read your book for a long time anyways so this can kick to stones with one bird!
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zigginah
Excuse me if I was rude in any way friend, I've been exhausted these last few days so I kinda forgot what I said.
Anyways if you wanna start with something, go and check out [Incubus's Curse 2: Path To Incubism] it's the 2nd most recent and best one I got so far, if you wanna check out any of the others your free to I wouldnt though, in my opiniom i could have did better with them but I might edit them when I learn to get better at writing.
The adventure of my isekai life is about a guy named Dev sharma. He experienced failures after failures his whole life because of his mental disease. After so many failures he decided to do suicide but he reincarnated in a different world with a young body. After examining he realises he have no injuries or disease whatsoever. Join Dev on his journey towards the top of the different world. Please leave a review.
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/24050721006752905?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4322137073
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@1AM done 
BTW loved your story, nice job
Arathes done yours, here is my story, I would like if you give me an honest review, thank you 
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-vengeance-hours_23159921406414405
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@MelodicSnow
@Sandipan_Dutta_7440
Kamelzy1
@Clorox_Bleach_8533
Hey is anyone fir swap review/collection? Please I want a honest review here's my link https://m.webnovel.com/book/my-throne_23647413906198505
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aleksandra_pano10 done yours, please review and collect my story too. Thank you 
here is the link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-vengeance-hours_23159921406414405
TurtleMaster6319 no you weren't mean or anything it was helpful. And I'll check it out probably add it to my library pretty busy so I can't read right now but ill read a few chapters today and ill give you honest opinions.
1AM Hii I'm done review your work after reading the 5 chapters! Its a good story! Please do on mine too. I would like it if you give me an honest review after reading at least 3 chapters. Here is my story https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-vengeance-hours_23159921406414405 thank youu
Hi! Who is up for a review swap? Here is my story:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-help-club-president-is-a-demon-lord_24032542005378805
If you can read until at least the 2nd chapter, that would be great. Thanks!
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netrics07 do you want a swap review with me? Here's mine https://m.webnovel.com/book/my-throne_23647413906198505
aleksandra_pano10 Would you like collection and review swap? Review will be done after my working hours.
