Arathes you didn't say what was wrong with my story love. Because if you had I wouldn't have asked. Nothing you said was helpful.

    GMSJakers
    Heck yeah! I've been meaning to read your book for a long time anyways so this can kick to stones with one bird!

      zigginah
      Excuse me if I was rude in any way friend, I've been exhausted these last few days so I kinda forgot what I said.
      Anyways if you wanna start with something, go and check out [Incubus's Curse 2: Path To Incubism] it's the 2nd most recent and best one I got so far, if you wanna check out any of the others your free to I wouldnt though, in my opiniom i could have did better with them but I might edit them when I learn to get better at writing.

        The adventure of my isekai life is about a guy named Dev sharma. He experienced failures after failures his whole life because of his mental disease. After so many failures he decided to do suicide but he reincarnated in a different world with a young body. After examining he realises he have no injuries or disease whatsoever. Join Dev on his journey towards the top of the different world. Please leave a review.
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          TurtleMaster6319 no you weren't mean or anything it was helpful. And I'll check it out probably add it to my library pretty busy so I can't read right now but ill read a few chapters today and ill give you honest opinions.

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