Anyone up for a review swap :> ?

Title: An Undying Love Story
Genre: Thriller Romance [but in the 70s]
Status: Ongoing [new chapters out every day] <i try>

Synopsis: Lena, now in an old age home, recollects her short yet lovely romance in her teenage years, through a diary she wishes to publish. Albeit her love life flourishing, it brings along with it, some problems that negatively affect her dear ones, and at some point, her too. Laugh and cry with her, as she walks down memory lane, nostalgia accompanying her in the last moments of her life.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/an-undying-love-story_20917543105020205

    Hello all Restful Sins here and I want to review swap on all sorts of books. I mainly read cultivation and fantasy but I like trying new ones as well. I just ask if you read my book let me know some stuff that could be changed to be more reader friendly.
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    Join Ezekiel keeper in a world were magic lives and the land runs red with blood. Follow him on his journey of power to protect what he loves.will he be able to become stronger than the force that drives him? Or will he fall into the abyss of hate and despair

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