Kage007 Been meaning to read your novel saw your post in another form, had some other reviews on my plate at the time. But I have some time now so I'll give your story a whole read through and I'll get back to you on here and leave an honest review on your story. Keep going strong. If you would like anymore feedback or criticism it's easier to get ahold of me through discord. NocturnOwl#0230

      MrFay I wanted to give your story a read after seeing you in the forum's for quite a bit. I'll be giving it a full read through alongside some other reviews I have lined up. I'll probably end up getting back to you on here, after leaving a review on your work. If you have discord, you can reach me easier there for any other feedback. NocturnOwl#0230

          MrFay No worries you didn't come off negative at all, I really appreciate you taking the time to write all this ! It's very helpful and I'll definitely try and improve upon the areas you've talked about. Thank you so much c:

              https://www.webnovel.com/book/primal-online_25529472006430205
              any reviews, comments, and or advice are greatly appreciated!
              small summary: Since childhood Wyatt has always followed the advice of the adults around him. Study hard! get a good job! honestly not bad advice the problem is that's all he has ever done. Stuck in a daily mundane loop Wyatt struggled to latch onto any interests. That is until a new game called Primal Online comes out.

              I'll be trying to read through as many novels and leave reviews as I can tonight!

              MrFay Thank you for my feedback. Writing is the only thing I can do decently and I agree that my cover is not very good. I'm not visually inclined so I'm actually planning to commission an artist friend to help out with my cover because again, my aesthetics are awful.

              Also, I know this isn't the forum for it, but I would love to get connected with some other writers and help each other with editing and feedback for their writing! I would get a lot of motivation if we could be in a group or something (This is open to anyone if you are interested!) The webnovel discord has been slow with verification, so I haven't been able to get into the full discord server, and would much rather be around a few other authors and grow together 🙂

                  AbyssalVox

                  https://discord.gg/YYGjkRsMWw

                  I agree that it would be cool to have a smaller group to encourage each other with editing and feedback! I’ve created a discord server called Webnovel Writers Community 😀 literally a few minutes ago though so yeah it’s open to changes, y’all can join and suggest new genre channels etc. if you want! Lemme know if the link doesn’t work but I think it should be okay

                      MrBtheNovelist Hey! Wanna have a swap...I'll do yours for chapters starting from 9 and you can do mine from where they are locked....

                          AbyssalVox Well let's create a discord server drop your ID we will make a community with Writers supporting each other!

                              prajnya_shriyan Still have no coins 😂 but 3! For some reason I can't even buy, their is something wrong for which I can't buy coins through mobile balance

                                  AbyssalVox

                                  As a fellow writer, I know how valuable it can be to connect with other writers and help each other with editing and feedback. That's why I've created this server as a space for us to come together, share our work, offer feedback, and support each other on this creative journey.

                                  Whether you're a seasoned writer or just starting out, we welcome you to join our community and contribute to our discussions, share your writing, and connect with other writers. We believe that writing is a collaborative process, and we're excited to build a community where we can grow and learn together.

                                  So if you're interested in joining a supportive community of writers, simply click on the link below https://discord.gg/2G6A2rqe and introduce yourself in the "introductions" channel. Let's motivate and inspire each other to reach our writing goals!

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                                      002_Yuki_Onna

                                      I appreciate the reply, nonetheless.

                                      Thank you for the link, I will be sure to read your novel and review it.

                                      Happy writing.

                                      Demons_and_I
                                      I apologize for bothering you, but I was wondering for when I can expect your review for my novel?
                                      I also wanted to thank you for your suggestions to my writing. I found them very helpful.

                                      Happy writing.

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