MagusBahaghari that's too long! Did you apply through inkstone? I am afraid you can only wait... But do you happen to have FB? Or discord? I will connect you to him for smoother conversation. So you can try to ask for a follow up if possible.

      RomanceFanatic028

      First off... no need to be rude. Second, I write my comments after I read the chapter. I wrote chapter comments for yours, sonce you has asked for them. I only noticed the reminder of the comments after reading, so I added them. Third, you wanted a review. That is what you got. I am honest with my reviews. I add critiques and compliments for the reviews. But, I am sorry if you found that the review was not to your standard. If you thought my review was going to be fake and all compliments, then no. I write 5 stars for people who deserve it

          Sorry for being rude but quit lying. I am very open towards criticism, but your review didn’t even made sense. You wanted me to show not tell? What did you wanted me to show? Those thing you mentioned was my character’s trait. You wanted me to write whole flashback to show it?

          And you are saying that you commented after reading the reminder. But for reading you need to click the link first. Don’t tell me you didn’t read “I need comments” which was right above the link.

          I don’t write this big comment usually, but you are portraying me as a bad guy. My book might not deserve 5 star rating, but it doesn’t deserve 3 and half for sure.

            RomanceFanatic028

            "Show not tell" is a phrase used for writers. I would explain it, but it's better for you to look it up

            Yes, I missed it. I am multi tasking with multiple ratings.

            And that is your personal opinion. I had a review that had no compliments but only corrwcted me in grammar and my characters portayal. I didn't get mad. We can simply agree to disagree. Sorry for the low rating. Critiques is one of the best things to do so you can improve

                Idyllic_Scribe

                Awesome thank you! I appreciate the review. You mentioned grammatical errors. Were there a lot of them? I had paid an editor to professionally edit the book, but then I went back to each chapter and made bunch of changes, (I am definitly not an editor, lol) adding more depth. I haven't been able to afford another edit, but it sounds like I am going to need t figure that out. Thank you for letting me know.

                    NinaChroni No, no!! Don't worry, there weren't many. I am a grammar phenatic, which I prob why I was able to spot them. But stuff like commas at the end of dialogue, those things. But you did very good! Not many grammar mistakes!!

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