Sorry for being rude but quit lying. I am very open towards criticism, but your review didnāt even made sense. You wanted me to show not tell? What did you wanted me to show? Those thing you mentioned was my characterās trait. You wanted me to write whole flashback to show it?
And you are saying that you commented after reading the reminder. But for reading you need to click the link first. Donāt tell me you didnāt read āI need commentsā which was right above the link.
I donāt write this big comment usually, but you are portraying me as a bad guy. My book might not deserve 5 star rating, but it doesnāt deserve 3 and half for sure.