RomanceFanatic028

First off... no need to be rude. Second, I write my comments after I read the chapter. I wrote chapter comments for yours, sonce you has asked for them. I only noticed the reminder of the comments after reading, so I added them. Third, you wanted a review. That is what you got. I am honest with my reviews. I add critiques and compliments for the reviews. But, I am sorry if you found that the review was not to your standard. If you thought my review was going to be fake and all compliments, then no. I write 5 stars for people who deserve it

      Sorry for being rude but quit lying. I am very open towards criticism, but your review didn’t even made sense. You wanted me to show not tell? What did you wanted me to show? Those thing you mentioned was my character’s trait. You wanted me to write whole flashback to show it?

      And you are saying that you commented after reading the reminder. But for reading you need to click the link first. Don’t tell me you didn’t read “I need comments” which was right above the link.

      I don’t write this big comment usually, but you are portraying me as a bad guy. My book might not deserve 5 star rating, but it doesn’t deserve 3 and half for sure.

        RomanceFanatic028

        "Show not tell" is a phrase used for writers. I would explain it, but it's better for you to look it up

        Yes, I missed it. I am multi tasking with multiple ratings.

        And that is your personal opinion. I had a review that had no compliments but only corrwcted me in grammar and my characters portayal. I didn't get mad. We can simply agree to disagree. Sorry for the low rating. Critiques is one of the best things to do so you can improve

            Idyllic_Scribe

            Awesome thank you! I appreciate the review. You mentioned grammatical errors. Were there a lot of them? I had paid an editor to professionally edit the book, but then I went back to each chapter and made bunch of changes, (I am definitly not an editor, lol) adding more depth. I haven't been able to afford another edit, but it sounds like I am going to need t figure that out. Thank you for letting me know.

                NinaChroni No, no!! Don't worry, there weren't many. I am a grammar phenatic, which I prob why I was able to spot them. But stuff like commas at the end of dialogue, those things. But you did very good! Not many grammar mistakes!!

                    I am still looking for authors who write stories in cultivation, isekai, wuxia/xianxia, system, action, fantasy, adventure, BL and magic genres to swap reviews with me. I will make sure to read your books and add them to my library if I like them. I also post chapter comments and may even suggest corrections in certain paragraphs to certain chapters.

                    I post kind and sincere reviews. If I find any need to correct punctuation or slight errors, I will only do it in paragraph comments.

                    Let me know by replying to this comment post.

                    Thank you!

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