xash_alan

Hey, I left a review on your story, sorry for the delay.
It's really good. I will be waiting for regular updates lol.
I love your writing style and how you describe the emotions the characters are feeling!

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    Averanges
    I finished reviewing your novel.
    It's a really fun read!

    Just a tip, please put the spoken dialogues in double quotation marks (",") instead of thoughts.
    On the other hand, you can use the (-) that you are currently using for dialogues for thoughts.
    You can also try using single quotation marks (',')

    It is really distracting to read words within double quotes and realise that they are thoughts and not spoken dialogue.

    Other than that it's great!

    btw are you planning on making it a harem or non-harem??

    Thanks for the review on mine.

      McCrunch
      Sure thing.
      -Pls read at least 5 chapters before reviewing
      -leave some comments here and there
      I will do the same for you
      Thanks

        VRW1
        Thanks, can you send me the link to yours? I will review as soon as I can.

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