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Mine is: y Daemon system
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SYNOPSIS
In a vast and mysterious world filled with monsters and powerful beings, the human race struggles to survive. Unexplained mysteries surround the world, and the reasons for the humanoid forms of monsters and other powerful beings are unknown. The semi-stable state of the human species in the land of Cythorpia is neither good nor bad. Despite their intelligence, humans remain weak in the food chain, constantly fighting for survival.
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I think I will write my review here because I think it will be harsh. I won't be giving any rated reviews for this.
It's your first time writing a novel, right?
I will take a few paragraphs here.
Just a few minutes ago I was going to the designated address to see the apartment I wanted to rent. Small dirty street with several entrances to staircases. Not a crowded place. Something very rare in New York, but it also showed that this place is not nice... But cheap.
Someone suddenly came up to me. A hood on his head, a pocket knife in his hand... This is a bad sign.
-OK, redhead, give me money and I will not hurt you - he had a very confident attitude.
I shivered slightly. This was the first time I found myself in such a situation. I was in a losing position as someone without any tools.
- Uh... Yes, sure... Just calm down. I don't want problems here - I replied and reached into my pocket.
I did it too fast. He reacted. His attitude changed immediately and he jumped in my direction to stab me. I moved in at the last moment and avoided getting hurt.
I don't really know what to say about this. It's full of error all over the place. Maybe I will show you my style.
Just a few minutes ago I was going to the designated address, to check on the apartment I wanted to rent. It's not as crowded as I think it was, such was a really rare scene in a city like New York. The streets around here are dirty, as expected, but I'm willing to rent here-- all for the cheap rent.
Just when I was looking around, trying to look for that place-- I noticed a hooded man was looking at me with a disturbing look.
...This seems like a bad sign.
-Ok, redhead. Hand over your money.- He said to me as he pulled out a pocket knife from his pocket, approaching me.
"!?" I was stunned.
W-Wait, is this really happening?! Is he going to rob me...!?
-Okay! Okay! I will just give you the money-- just calm down, okay!?- I replied while reaching my pocket.
Pepper spray, stun gun-- crap, I forgot to bring my tools today...!?
When I realized, that guy pounced towards me. It seems that guy realized what I was trying to do.
I reluctantly took a back step at the last moment, dodging his knife.
What do you think? Is it smoother?
You are using first person narrative, I think what you are doing there is telling a story instead of being in a story. Be clear of what you want. You need to tell your readers what your MC is feeling during that moment.
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LuciferVermillion
Wow the difference is obvious and very honest.
Please can you review mine also. And let me know my mistakes.
I will read five chapters of yours and add to library
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Title: There's Something Wrong With You, My Lord! 
Contains Boy's Love or Yaoi Warning
Synopsis:
Battered, injured, jaded and marvellously wreaked. Luis Lee was one of the powerful ability user during the time of apocalypse but that was until he found himself reincarnated in a magical world full of hunks and gorgeously powerful moon elves. At that moment he thought, "Let's live a slow slutty life, (b)itches!"
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However, an obnoxious system was added into the mix saying that he is reincarnated in a world of a book.
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Few days old moon elf lord: Will I ever get a proper rest?
A story of a perverted soul who just wanted to get laid starts now.
updates 1 chapters a day~
add five collection = 1 extra chapter
add 10 power stones per day = 2 extra chapters
This is my first ever novel.
photo used as cover is not mine.
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Here's your review. To be honest, I like your storyline. However, something about your wording throws me off all around. You have a lot of work to do.
- Your characters lacked a whole lot of description.
For example, all I know that Kai is white, Lucifer is black, Sia is white.
Or you kidding me? Are you seriously telling your readers only about their hair colour?
- The situation in that mysterious building which I still had no idea what is it.
Kai, walks in to an unknown building. Walking across more gates and doors.
Then, there's five person waiting in that room.
As I continued to read, there's this odd relationship going.
So, Sia is the granddaughter. Lucifer is... father? Grandfather? And also his nameless wife.
In Chapter 2, pops out a Leon, and his nameless wife. What is their relationship?
Then, Sasha and Sarah pops up. Whose who's wife???
Now I got confused who is the daughter in law, who is the grandmother.
Grammar and spelling errors. (It's right below.)
Not scary and terrifying enough to catch my attention.
For example:
A month ago, near the deep waters of the ocean. A figure walked along the shore with long white hair, seemingly unfazed by the rolling of thunder, and sparks of lightening, making a perfect background for the ascension of souls to hell.
She was barefoot with a gown hung loosely on her shoulders. She seemed lost, but still moved forward anyway, eventually arriving at a desolate castle that seemed so out of place and wrong. Her face brightened at the sight of shelter, not knowing the dangers that awaits within.
Sia stepped in, found a suitable place to rest and lay on it. She glanced around, putting her environment to memory and checking for any unknown danger. before she knew it, she dozed off.
It wasn't long when she started resting that she felt a weight pressing on her palms and feet.
'What the...' she couldn't finish the thought since she suddenly screamed. Quickly gaining her senses, she was shocked by the sight in front of her.
A creature with a body so incorpeal, she could gaze past it, was staring at her with it's hollow eyes.
It didn't take a second before she knew what she was looking at.
'A spirit!' Shocked out of her senses she tried to move out of the way but realized to her horro that it wasn't just one. She was sorrounded by spirits with each one scarier than the first.
Sia experienced true fear for the first time. Her heart was beating so fast her chest hurt. But that wasn't an excuse for the spirits not to lunge at her. She ran. She didn't know how she was seemingly faster than the spirits but still ran.
'Maybe it's the adrenaline' she thought.
But that didn't last for long. The spirits dearly craved her living soul. They followed her with craziness in their movements and frenzied whispers. She was sorrounded. Again.
With no option left, She made a crazy decision and jumped into the cursed waters, hardly creating any ripple on its surface. The spirits stopped, shivered in fear and headed back.
Dude, you need serious proofreading.
Here's my version:
A month ago, near the waters of the ocean-- a figure with long white hair, walked along the shore.
She had a gown hung loosely on her shoulders and her feet bared.
Despite the rolling and crashing lightnings from the red sky, the pouring rain, the roaring waves of the seas-- the girl seemed unfazed, as she was lost.
Eventually, she saw a desolate castle that seemed so out of place.
'Wasn't this place a gateway to hell?' She thought.
However, her face brightened at the sight of the shelter.
The girl hurriedly ran towards the castle and make her way through the heavy gates and doors.
As expected, the castle is dark. There's no one here but her alone. But the fact that she finally escaped from the harsh environment, made her felt relief and eventually dozed off.
...Until she felt a weight pressing on her arms and feet.
"!?"
Quickly regaining her senses, the girl opened her eyes, only to find that she's having trouble to move.
Green lights of floating flames lit up the entire castle.
However, the girl's attention is completely robbed away by the dark figure that was pinning her hands.
A flesh that was rotten till its bones were visible, yet so incorporeal that she could gaze past it. Although terrified, at the same time, she was filled with curiosity. She raised her head......
......just to notice that the dark figure with hollow eyes, is staring at her with a wide and disturbing grin.
"Freeessssh...... body......... soouuuuuuul...!!!" The creature screeched.
His rotten face and teeth shocked her to the core. It didn't take a second before she knew what she was looking at.
"NO-- GET OFF ME...!!!"
Shocked out of her senses, the girl struggled as hard as she could, but she couldn't break free.
...Until the dark figure opens his mouth.
The dark figure's mouth opens wide, till its face tore off-- till its mouth could swallow the girl's head in whole. Inside the figure's mouth, lies white figures of people's soul, screaming and crying for help.
"NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!" The girl screamed, after witnessing this horror.
The girl finally experienced true fear for the first time. Her heart was beats so fast that her chest hurt, but she couldn't care less.
She mustered all her strength and finally broke free.
Yet, only to realize she wasn't surrounded by just two spirits.
The spirits with their moaning and thirst for a living soul, are approaching her.
Every possible exit was sealed, but one door. Though it was narrow, but she think she could make it if she tried.
The girl, dragged her exhausted body and ran towards the door.
Using last ounce of strength, she pushed the door wide...
"SOULLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!"
...just to find more despair.
It was a backyard, filled with countless graves, and countless dark figures.
Yet, among those-- only a small lake remained untainted.
The girl had no time to think. She could not back off, nor she could advance forward. She had been struggling from the clutches of the dark figures.
Thus, she made a choice.
The girl, jumped.
She jumped into the lake that created no ripple on its surface.
P.S.
Why on earth am I even doing this...? I kinda regret this. But oh well, take it as you see fit. I wish to have more than five chapters in return. How about 20?