I've read it and added to my library. I will vote yours after you read mine.

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      UNIVERSE : ORIGIN BY Gy_F6
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      A new novel .warning stable update are not happening now but will be in future.chapters are still regularly released do check them out .at least for time pass.

      SYNOPSIS

      In a vast and mysterious world filled with monsters and powerful beings, the human race struggles to survive. Unexplained mysteries surround the world, and the reasons for the humanoid forms of monsters and other powerful beings are unknown. The semi-stable state of the human species in the land of Cythorpia is neither good nor bad. Despite their intelligence, humans remain weak in the food chain, constantly fighting for survival.

      The story is told from multiple perspectives, including the main character's, as well as other important characters such as the villain, side characters, and other powerful beings in the world. As the main character embarks on various quests and explores the world, they encounter a variety of challenges and mysteries. He meet different people with their own problems, including princess trying to escape the clutches of her family and villain pursuing his dreams without regard for anyone standing in his way.

      With a unique system of danger levels and abysmally low survival rates, the world is fraught with peril, and the main character must use their wits and skills to survive. The civilization of the world has been lost, and the reasons for its demise are unknown. The world consists of multiple continents, and between them are bodies of water, magma, mist/fog, undead misama, and the big death river.

      Overall, this is a story of adventure, mystery, and fantasy, with multiple perspectives that provide a rich and varied experience for the reader.
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          ShadowNovaS

          I think I will write my review here because I think it will be harsh. I won't be giving any rated reviews for this.

          It's your first time writing a novel, right?

          I will take a few paragraphs here.

          1. Just a few minutes ago I was going to the designated address to see the apartment I wanted to rent. Small dirty street with several entrances to staircases. Not a crowded place. Something very rare in New York, but it also showed that this place is not nice... But cheap.

          2. Someone suddenly came up to me. A hood on his head, a pocket knife in his hand... This is a bad sign.

          3. -OK, redhead, give me money and I will not hurt you - he had a very confident attitude.

          4. I shivered slightly. This was the first time I found myself in such a situation. I was in a losing position as someone without any tools.

          5. - Uh... Yes, sure... Just calm down. I don't want problems here - I replied and reached into my pocket.

          6. I did it too fast. He reacted. His attitude changed immediately and he jumped in my direction to stab me. I moved in at the last moment and avoided getting hurt.

          I don't really know what to say about this. It's full of error all over the place. Maybe I will show you my style.

          Just a few minutes ago I was going to the designated address, to check on the apartment I wanted to rent. It's not as crowded as I think it was, such was a really rare scene in a city like New York. The streets around here are dirty, as expected, but I'm willing to rent here-- all for the cheap rent.

          Just when I was looking around, trying to look for that place-- I noticed a hooded man was looking at me with a disturbing look.

          ...This seems like a bad sign.

          -Ok, redhead. Hand over your money.- He said to me as he pulled out a pocket knife from his pocket, approaching me.

          "!?" I was stunned.

          W-Wait, is this really happening?! Is he going to rob me...!?

          -Okay! Okay! I will just give you the money-- just calm down, okay!?- I replied while reaching my pocket.

          Pepper spray, stun gun-- crap, I forgot to bring my tools today...!?

          When I realized, that guy pounced towards me. It seems that guy realized what I was trying to do.

          I reluctantly took a back step at the last moment, dodging his knife.

          What do you think? Is it smoother?

          You are using first person narrative, I think what you are doing there is telling a story instead of being in a story. Be clear of what you want. You need to tell your readers what your MC is feeling during that moment.

          P.S.

          I wrote my review here. Hope you would give me a fair exchange in return.

              LuciferVermillion
              Wow the difference is obvious and very honest.
              Please can you review mine also. And let me know my mistakes.
              I will read five chapters of yours and add to library

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