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    Hey everyone, this is my first released novel. It has 5 chapters so far with about 3 chapters becoming available a week. If you read please leave a review and some constructive criticism if you can. Give me time to actually read your stories and I will also leave a review and some tips. Thank you!

    Link: King Fool

    Fixated on stories of magic since a young child, King Lonson VI of Oates sets out on an expedition to find it. But....his undying obsession may lead to his death along with the downfall the Oates Kingdom.
    "...But magic must exist! How else can we explain the unexplainable?"

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      HeziTheGreat

      Friendly tip: You can divide that paragraph into two or three.
      Like the second paragraph can start onto the 'My Grandfather..." followed by the third starting on the word 'Before...'. You can also try paragraph making by starting separating each of them after 6 or 7 sentences or phrases and then start a new one. Thank you.

        HeziTheGreat Your story also has a super 'formal' feel/type of language/tense that may probably turn off your readers (especially if your target readers are teenagers) might found this intimidating to read.

          Sunus_Writes

          Friendly tip: You can divide those LONG paragraphs into two or three.

          You can also try paragraph making by starting separating each of them after 6 or 7 sentences or phrases and then start a new one. I honestly got lost on those dialogue part on where I do not know who is talking/conversing with who so please look carefully on that part. Thank you.

              Kihitakamy I just read yours and 'system'? stories are kinda confusing especially when it is on the boring narration side. Grammar can be improved and pay close attention to the dialogues that should have helped brought up the entire chapter. Thank you.

                  TheCraZyaUthOr19 I just read yours and I must say the first chapter does not impressed me. An explosive prologue/first chapters can probably add the 'interesting' factor your story lacks. Grammar can be improved as well. Thank you.

                      Wassup!!! Please feel free to check out my work and I hope you enjoy it!

                      https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/22606590906640305?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4305047673

                      Title: The Earth’s Redemption Arc

                      Genre: superpower, apocalypse, survival

                      Synopsis: The heroes do not always win.

                      2022 December 31st, 10 pm, Earth descended into darkness. Human civilizations crumbled before the wrath of a zombie apocalypse. Wrecking destruction and havoc, humanity struggles to survive despite gaining superhuman abilities. Eventually, Earth perished.

                      Or did it?

                      The universe decided to give the residents of Earth a second chance in form of “Terra”, a Planet widely similar to Earth yet filled with many more possibilities.

                      Can the people of Earth turn over a new leaf and successfully redeem themselves on this new planet? Or will they perish once again?

                      Welcome to The Earth’s very own… Redemption Arc!

                        bacon_bacon I just read yours and your story felt like a one-person/MC only 'narration'/story telling due to the lack of probably important dialogues with the other characters involved. Grammar can be improved too, Thank you.

                            vhfprgjsdfdhj Hi I have read yours and story wise, it has a lot of 'narration' parts that actually tells/mostly describes the entire story flow. Given that you still have few chapters posted, add a little dialogue between the characters to make this more interesting. Good grammar too. Thank you.

                                Hello~ Hope you like it.
                                https://www.webnovel.com/book/kismet's-memoir_22616781805430205

                                Title: Kismet's Memoir
                                Synopsis:
                                Like a man and his oasis. A mirage I chased, a desire I can't quench.

                                It was him.

                                A will-o'-wisp, something I'm not worthy to gain. Undeniable truth laid bare but it held no importance as I desperately clung to a mere impossible probability.

                                He never been mine.

                                I over calculated things that never been there. Muddled by murky jealousy, fiends whispering delirious words of deceit. The night seemed longer as sleep never showed any intention to visit but the shadow of you... did. Like a peasant I begged for his love, an insatiable greed.

                                Sadly, he was a generous man and I was an envious lady.

                                It would have been easy to seal our fates together but this ability of mine will only keep you imprisoned. It is not right but why to I long for you.

                                Yvon who seems to have her life slowly falling apart suddenly discovers that she has the ability to change one's future. Tempted by her own desires to turn things around, she embarks on a journey to what she truly wants in life.

                                To those who seek Kismet's four muses, a treacherous path awaits you.

                                  When she finds herself reincarnating all over again in her cheater ex boyfriend novel , and not even as the main character but as the side character ..the usless sister .
                                  The villain's number one
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                                    I've been on hiatus for a year but I'm continuing where I left off in my first novel! Any reads would be super appreciated

                                    In the blink of an eye, Ezra Nyx’s life changes forever. As an ordinary college student, he hasn’t thought much of his future, but one night, he experiences something life-changing. He now knows something that no one else does, humanity is not alone. Unknown forces are finding their way to Earth and making it their little playground. Follow Ezra’s journey as he navigates through all the chaos and becomes more than he ever thought he could be.

                                    Read at: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-whispering-blade_16045960405739505

                                      Those who are up for a review swap dm me at discord gnaipafe#6374
                                      “Our fangs are meant to bite against each other. Our love is a threat to start a war. We are ill-fitted but we are fate bonded.”

                                      Blair Whitfield’s life should have been easy if she had only done what had been expected of her. Do her responsibility as an Alpha's daughter. Marry a strong wolf arranged for her. That was what was planned for her since young.

                                      However, for the first time in her life, she went against her kind. She refused to be a pawn in their power struggle.

                                      Escaping the grasp of her family, Blair realized that while she didn’t feel an attraction to her betrothed, she could feel the spark with someone that was not one of her kind. Instead, it was with the Vampire prince, Lucien Bardot, the wild card of vampire royalty.

                                      To say it was bizarre would be an understatement. It was downright chaos.
                                      Would their love survive with all the odds they have to face? Would it be their strength or their weakness?

                                      https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-vampire-prince's-pretend-bride_22634097306759905
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                                        Title: You Think I Won't Talk?

                                        Elizabeth, a girl with an unusual personality is reincarnated into the body of a mute woman in what appeared to be medieval times. However, the people surrounding her seemed familiar. She had transmigrated as the dead villainess's older sister in a +19 rated novel she read long ago in her past life.

                                        Marianne, the previous owner of the body, had a tragic past. Abused by his obsessed older brother and little sister, the part of her soul left in the body doesn't give Elizabeth freedom.

                                        Elizabeth will now know the truth of Marianne's condition, experience unknown feelings and recall her past to overcome difficulties.

                                        'I'm gonna go crazy...how is it that this girl didn't even have her name mentioned in the novel?... some authors really are idiots...'

                                        https://m.webnovel.com/book/you-think-i-won't-talk_22503744806872305

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                                          If anyone is willing to read and leave a review on my story it would be much appreciated. Please reply to me with your link if you would like me to review yours 🙂

                                          A war of the heart and the mind.
                                          Ashleigh, the daughter of Alpha Wyatt of Winter has been blessed by the Goddess. Barely eighteen and she has met her mate, both of them.
                                          Granger, the kind-hearted scout she has loved for two years, or Caleb, the cold Alpha of Summer who has a grudge against her father.
                                          Now she must decide which of these wolves is her one true mate.
                                          While her heart is at war with itself, there is real life struggle happening amongst all of the werewolf packs. Rogue wolves have started attacking, and though at first, they seem random, they are strangely organized.
                                          Ashleigh must resolve the conflict of her heart, while also discovering who the true enemy that threatens them all is.

                                          https://www.webnovel.com/book/mated-to-an-enemy_22608088705403705

                                            Hello to everyone who loves reading books in the Romantic Drama genre! I wanted to share with you my book that I've been writing for two months now! I hope you enjoy reading it or at least give it a try.

                                            "You and I need to declare to them that we are dating."

                                            • Teen/Drama. Going through their inner problems, they are looking for peace to feel real. It so happens that they find themselves in the same literary club, and their lives begin to gradually change.

                                            • If you enjoy dramas with elements of psychology brought to the storyline about several students from Tokyo, this film will suit you just fine.

                                            "Why does one's happiness not return with a coin…? Why should I endure it for more than a decade? Did I do something wrong?" she said quietly, leaning on her knees.

                                            It was the cycle of her life.

                                            Link: Over the Bridges to Singing Waterfalls

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                                              I consider myself to be a man of principle. But, what man does not? Even the cutthroat, I have noticed, considers his actions "moral" after a fashion.
                                              Perhaps another person, reading of my life, would name me a religious tyrant. He could call me arrogant. What is to make that man's opinion any less valid than my own?

                                              I guess it all comes down to one fact :
                                              In the end, I'm the one with the armies.

                                              It's an empire ruled by an immortal God, where volcanic ash fall from the sky and most of the population are slaves. A thousand year ago, the lord czar was the chosen one or more like Hero of ages from a prophecy and saved the world from a horrible fate! Or so the tale goes.

                                              And clearly, something went wrong, since now the world is basically ruled by a Dark Lord. Where are our real heroes? Who will be our new "hope of light?" Will the half breeds dare to try?

                                              Join us in the journey to overturn the inevitable!

                                              [ THE HALF-BREEDS]

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                                                Looking for some to swap the review and collections with.
                                                1) I will review your book from my other account called 'drippingsarcasm'
                                                2) I will review yours after you are done reviewing mine.
                                                3) DON'T REPLY saying ' I am done. Your turn' or something like this.
                                                4) If you collect my book in your library then I will collect yours.
                                                5) My rating will be the same as yours.
                                                6) Read before leaving a review.
                                                Link : https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/22307853006726205?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4317414678

                                                Looking for some to swap the review and collections with.
                                                1) I will review your book from my other account called 'drippingsarcasm'
                                                2) I will review yours after you are done reviewing mine.
                                                3) DON'T REPLY saying ' I am done. Your turn' or something like this.
                                                4) If you collect my book in your library then I will collect yours.
                                                5) My rating will be the same as yours.
                                                6) Read before leaving a review.
                                                Link : https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/22307853006726205?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4317414678

                                                  Forgotten_Memoir Hi, Sorry for the late response. Good story but the un-divided long paragraphs made me stop reading it. Please consider those by dividing them into two or three. Thank you.

                                                      Serifa_G I got confused on some chapters because on some lines/part I do not know who is talking to. This is more like a linear narration story telling so probably adding some dialogues could make it more interesting.

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