https://www.webnovel.com/book/tales-of-the-demon-hero_22581013806467205###
Mine is probably strange but Thank you for reading and etc. in advance.
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Thank you.
Hey everyone, this is my first released novel. It has 5 chapters so far with about 3 chapters becoming available a week. If you read please leave a review and some constructive criticism if you can. Give me time to actually read your stories and I will also leave a review and some tips. Thank you!
Fixated on stories of magic since a young child, King Lonson VI of Oates sets out on an expedition to find it. But....his undying obsession may lead to his death along with the downfall the Oates Kingdom.
"...But magic must exist! How else can we explain the unexplainable?"
Friendly tip: You can divide that paragraph into two or three.
Like the second paragraph can start onto the 'My Grandfather..." followed by the third starting on the word 'Before...'. You can also try paragraph making by starting separating each of them after 6 or 7 sentences or phrases and then start a new one. Thank you.
HeziTheGreat Your story also has a super 'formal' feel/type of language/tense that may probably turn off your readers (especially if your target readers are teenagers) might found this intimidating to read.
chery_cabral Hi there. https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/22596612005311005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4309104437
Would appreciate your input on this...Thanks in advance
Friendly tip: You can divide those LONG paragraphs into two or three.
You can also try paragraph making by starting separating each of them after 6 or 7 sentences or phrases and then start a new one. I honestly got lost on those dialogue part on where I do not know who is talking/conversing with who so please look carefully on that part. Thank you.
chery_cabral Thank you so much for the feedback. Will correct that.
Kihitakamy I just read yours and 'system'? stories are kinda confusing especially when it is on the boring narration side. Grammar can be improved and pay close attention to the dialogues that should have helped brought up the entire chapter. Thank you.
Link : https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/22307853006726205?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4317414678
Do read patiently. I will be worth it. Thank you in advance.
chery_cabral Hi, thanks for the review chery_cabral, I will work on it.
HeziTheGreat thank you for the comments on my story. I will be including those notes during the first editing.
please read, and leave an honest review to further improve my writing skills.
here's the link:https://www.webnovel.com/book/i'm-not-the-ice-queen_22489289305603005
TheCraZyaUthOr19 I just read yours and I must say the first chapter does not impressed me. An explosive prologue/first chapters can probably add the 'interesting' factor your story lacks. Grammar can be improved as well. Thank you.
chery_cabral thank you for your honest review, now I know what things I lack.
Wassup!!! Please feel free to check out my work and I hope you enjoy it!
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/22606590906640305?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4305047673
Title: The Earth’s Redemption Arc
Genre: superpower, apocalypse, survival
Synopsis: The heroes do not always win.
2022 December 31st, 10 pm, Earth descended into darkness. Human civilizations crumbled before the wrath of a zombie apocalypse. Wrecking destruction and havoc, humanity struggles to survive despite gaining superhuman abilities. Eventually, Earth perished.
Or did it?
The universe decided to give the residents of Earth a second chance in form of “Terra”, a Planet widely similar to Earth yet filled with many more possibilities.
Can the people of Earth turn over a new leaf and successfully redeem themselves on this new planet? Or will they perish once again?
Welcome to The Earth’s very own… Redemption Arc!
bacon_bacon I just read yours and your story felt like a one-person/MC only 'narration'/story telling due to the lack of probably important dialogues with the other characters involved. Grammar can be improved too, Thank you.
Try my book and leave a review or a comment if you want 
It would mean a lot to me
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vhfprgjsdfdhj Hi I have read yours and story wise, it has a lot of 'narration' parts that actually tells/mostly describes the entire story flow. Given that you still have few chapters posted, add a little dialogue between the characters to make this more interesting. Good grammar too. Thank you.
Hello~ Hope you like it.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/kismet's-memoir_22616781805430205
Title: Kismet's Memoir
Synopsis:
Like a man and his oasis. A mirage I chased, a desire I can't quench.
It was him.
A will-o'-wisp, something I'm not worthy to gain. Undeniable truth laid bare but it held no importance as I desperately clung to a mere impossible probability.
He never been mine.
I over calculated things that never been there. Muddled by murky jealousy, fiends whispering delirious words of deceit. The night seemed longer as sleep never showed any intention to visit but the shadow of you... did. Like a peasant I begged for his love, an insatiable greed.
Sadly, he was a generous man and I was an envious lady.
It would have been easy to seal our fates together but this ability of mine will only keep you imprisoned. It is not right but why to I long for you.
Yvon who seems to have her life slowly falling apart suddenly discovers that she has the ability to change one's future. Tempted by her own desires to turn things around, she embarks on a journey to what she truly wants in life.
To those who seek Kismet's four muses, a treacherous path awaits you.
