@DKQ love what you are doing man... Can you give my novel a look in? I'm planning on editing it once I'm done with the first volume.
Here is a link to the novel... https://m.webnovel.com/book/10425717206035305?keyword=The%207%20&source=auto
(Sorry for giving you the mobile link, I'm currently using my phone). The title of the Novel is called The 7 Realms....
Thanks bro...
tooTired I got your back! Let us go through the basic mistakes which I noticed in the first chapter and second, we have overused words mate, that is very bad because unless its a characteristic of the character in the story then change it (Usage of Grammarly or other similar sites to help you out with it can be good). The best way to improve your novel (based on chapter 1 and 2)
We also have an issue with Passive vs Active voices, the best way to improve that would be from this reference : https://writing.wisc.edu/Handbook/CCS_activevoice.html
Simple yet easy to not find issues, I would recommend reading your novel out-loud if you have issues with writing as it can help you improve your work by leaps! Keep up the good work and good luck!
Would be going to try another style to reduce the number of novels I will have to review, already taking most the time of my day so I will link to this site which has been linked to me by a great person on this site, it will help with your novel and will make you improve a lot!
http://www.writersdigest.com/online-editor/your-novel-blueprint
Before asking me to review any novel please make sure to read what I typed above, based on that I should have answered many common mistakes, I am but a reader and I also can't read everything at once, if anyone can help me out with this please reply to DKQ#7294 on discord and hopefully once we reach 100 posts we will create a discord server to answer several small issues while reviews will be posted here. Thank you, everyone, for your support!
MrDojo Well your novel is a first :) I have noticed how you have a balance between simple and complex sentences, the story itself is amazing from the start. Only issues I have noticed which needs improvements are:
Some references to help you out:
https://goinswriter.com/how-to-overcome-writers-block/
https://www.time4writing.com/articles-about-writing/vocabulary/
http://www2.eit.ac.nz/library/OnlineGuides/Sentence%20Starters.pdf
Can you please give insight into my work as well?
I would like to know your honest opinion about my work,so that I can ameliorate my work in the forthcoming chapters.
link is:
https://www.webnovel.com/search?keywords=IT%27S%20ALWAYS%20BEEN%20YOU
I really appreciate your work and thank you.
DKQ heheh thank u!
LoL Actually I have the intention to change some mistakes in early parts. but sometimes I didn't have time or just forgot. LoL. But I'll try to find some free time to fix it. At least after the Inkstone bug problem was finished and fix.
And about uk and US really sometimes I didn't notice that cuz in Indonesia, some of indonesian will mix it together without our knowned. May be it become habit . 
alostgirl I finished reading 5 chapters, not my taste as I rarely read romance type of novels but I can easily identify this is a copy of vampire diaries, I wouldn't say it is a bad thing but its just very similar. The first thing I have talked about in my thread is copying someone else work, it is fine if you want to make it into something similar but copying is very bad without permission. Let us go through the common mistakes first and identify the mistakes:
Some mistakes as I have talked about can be read out loud and this will help you improve by leaps. I hope you the best and good luck with your work!
alostgirl I have reviewed it based on me being a reader, If I was the author I will have the mindset of writing my uni essay (bad headache time) that is why I am a bit strict while reviewing other novels, I rate your novel based on 3 things.
This is my main focus during reviewing novels after doing it for a few days, if it was in uni I would most likely focus on the major, language and ignore the age limit. I hate including gender while reviewing as this will lead me to be biased towards one gender so I will only go through the text for most the novels and forget about the gender. So when I reviewed your novel here is
This is not only to help you but help myself in the future if I want to start writing as it will teach me and you. The biggest problem while being an author is not looking at our novels from a reader point of view which will not only affect us but others who read it leads to bad reviews and bad comments destroying the novel. I apologize if I have made any mistakes and will reflect on it, keep up the good work!
DKQ You are really doing amazing.
Keep it up! :smile:
DKQ I don't have much experience with discord but am willing to learn and help you set the server up. If you want help? I would also like to help review novels if you still want help?
creativewritting That would be great, will contact you when I create the discord server, most likely within 12 hours as I am writing a new article at the moment for my uni. Helpers are welcome as I plan to mod all those that want to assist with the novels.
Requirements are basic English for all those that want to help out. Reviews will be posted through this thread while the discord will be used to get a better understand on the novels we will review.
