Yvonne_Jemutai An honest review is an honest review, though I was looking for a bit of criticism πŸ˜… . Give me a day or something to finish reading your book, I'll give my honest review after I finish.

    Spartan_Wolf
    I'll work on yours as well. It will take me some time so, expect it in about a day. I have two books. One with over 50 chapters and one with less chapters, but it only has around 11 story chapters.

      DjxCarma I suppose I'll read the one with 50 chapters. I'll give my review in like a day or two so it'll take some time.

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          DjxCarma I'm doing SternKunst at the moment. But, thank you very much for the criticism of my story. I think I can improve a lot now after reading yours and Starcraft's reviews!

          Have a look at my new Dark Fantasy novel that I submitted to the WSA called Plastic Primrose.
          https://www.webnovel.com/book/plastic-primrose_23285027805686305
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          [Mature Content Warning]
          Sitting down in front of her television, Selma Walsh watches in horror and disgust as a former classmate's name is broadcasted in the weekly execution schedule. Growing up in the New American Coalition has conditioned Selma to seeing these atrocious acts as just normal occurrences, no matter how terrible they are. However, seeing the name of someone she once loved leaves her feeling truly afraid of her fate.
          Centuries after the 5th World War has left most of the United States uninhabitable, the NAC remains as the only safe haven for human life in Eastern America. However, with fanatical leaders left wishing and romanticizing life before the Darkness, strict laws were placed.
          Now, once a child becomes an adult, they are expected to be married and to immediately start a family. Those that are not, are conscripted into the military for skirmishes in areas outside of the safe havens.
          All for the betterment of humanity.

            f0011
            Okay. Honestly, I am not understanding the situation. You could have at least replied to the review swap post.

              1AM i must have forgot, i believe i've reviewed your work

              • 1AM replied to this.

                f0011
                Nope. There's not even a chapter or paragraph comment.

                  1AM which book am i supposed to review?

                  • 1AM replied to this.

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                      wookie0_ Sorry for the late review!! I really love your novel, excellent writing and story! Keep it up! πŸ‘οΈ

                        Here's my light novel if you would like to read / review!
                        https://www.webnovel.com/book/dark-utopia_22759395006338705

                        SYPNOSIS:
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                        An ordinary young man, who honed his sword, skilled against battles, only to be exposed to anguish. Longing for revenge, he had eventually placed himself inside the Divine Tower;

                        yet little did he know, his life, and the future of the world would later be held in his own hands. This is Dark Utopia.
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                        MITCHIEWilliams

                        Teddie_Chen

                          Hey anyone up for review swapping?
                          http://wbnv.in/a/2agqNVB
                          If the hyperlink doesn't work, it's called (Incubus's Curse 2: Path To Incubism) and it's about an author OC who gets ripped out of her world and into the novel they more or less dropped and ended.

                            @MITCHIEWilliams
                            I read your book and it's really an interesting take, well for me that is, not what I'd usually read but I like it, my mans the guy who came for the emperor is my current favorite and I'm gonna read some more of your book, Also if you get the chance, ya mind checking mine out, it doesn't really matter if you do but I'm just trying to promote mine a little.

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