Hi! I'm here for an honest review swap. I'm trying to improve my writing skills and novel to the best of my ability, but recently I've seemed to have hit a bottleneck. Constructive feedback would be appreciated.

I'll give you an honest review if you have a book with less than 50 chapters. If it's any more than that, then I'll give my honest review by reading the first 50 chapters. But before giving your review, please read at least the first 25 chapters of my novel.

The review can be negative, but only if there are any tips for improvements in the same review.

My book is a smut story, so it could be a hard read for some. If you're up for an honest review then here's my link:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-cultivating-seductress-system_23429250705423005?ticket=tt33bd20b7e4e94485a5f0f41c37de6297&userid=4318383232

    Yvonne_Jemutai An honest review is an honest review, though I was looking for a bit of criticism 😅 . Give me a day or something to finish reading your book, I'll give my honest review after I finish.

        Spartan_Wolf
        I'll work on yours as well. It will take me some time so, expect it in about a day. I have two books. One with over 50 chapters and one with less chapters, but it only has around 11 story chapters.

            DjxCarma I suppose I'll read the one with 50 chapters. I'll give my review in like a day or two so it'll take some time.

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                  DjxCarma I'm doing SternKunst at the moment. But, thank you very much for the criticism of my story. I think I can improve a lot now after reading yours and Starcraft's reviews!

                      Have a look at my new Dark Fantasy novel that I submitted to the WSA called Plastic Primrose.
                      https://www.webnovel.com/book/plastic-primrose_23285027805686305
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                      [Mature Content Warning]
                      Sitting down in front of her television, Selma Walsh watches in horror and disgust as a former classmate's name is broadcasted in the weekly execution schedule. Growing up in the New American Coalition has conditioned Selma to seeing these atrocious acts as just normal occurrences, no matter how terrible they are. However, seeing the name of someone she once loved leaves her feeling truly afraid of her fate.
                      Centuries after the 5th World War has left most of the United States uninhabitable, the NAC remains as the only safe haven for human life in Eastern America. However, with fanatical leaders left wishing and romanticizing life before the Darkness, strict laws were placed.
                      Now, once a child becomes an adult, they are expected to be married and to immediately start a family. Those that are not, are conscripted into the military for skirmishes in areas outside of the safe havens.
                      All for the betterment of humanity.

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