You have to think about the rhythm of your story. Read what you've already written imagining that you're a reader and that you don't know anything about it. Then ask yourself, if I were a reader, how would I react to reading this? Is good? Is it pleasant or is it dull and boring?
Imagine, imagining is being able to bring to life the scenario in which your world is being created. Describe the scenarios of this world, describe a little of what is relevant around the MC.

Speaking of comparisons, what do other powerful/rich characters have that the MC doesn't? Make it look like the MC is jealous and your goal is to have it, so when the MC wins you over, it will give the reader a sense of accomplishment.
For example, there is a very beautiful and rich beauty in the big city, but the MC feels inferior and can only admire her beauty from afar, as he is a country commoner.
Due to some twist of fate, the MC obtained treasures, grew strong, gained status, and finally attracted the interest her.

However, the MC will feel that this beauty lost her beauty after her worldview was enhanced and he met other even more stunning beauties in even more important cities.

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