Neverfire7 Damn son. just damn. :) i actually edited my website. check it and give me some feed back while i try to list the posts. thanks man. by the way what ur name, mine is ilyas.

    zswaleh Yeah, I noticed you changed the background colour, font and you're listing the different posts you've made. Cool stuff.
    Should I transfer ownership over to you or simply let it go? I don't mind which option you choose:) If you stick with your WordPress site, you may be able to take it to greater heights than you could do with google sites.

    Oh, and I'm Adarsh, a pleasure to meet you.

      Neverfire7 it is fixed now. by the way i just played with it till it worked. thought it was gonna be harder. guess u know until u try something

      MONSTER PARADIS is out.

      Need the next novel.

      plz comment on what u think should be next.

        zswaleh The glare of the reaper will pierce the Heaven,the sky,the mountains,the earth,and it will stop to stood before your crumbling soul which shiver in fright ,horror and most importantly the guilt of what you have done.

        -@WeebMonsieur November 13 2017 RIP

        But seriously my gf squeeze my neck with a heavy duty vice, just because I ate her yogurt because I thought it's actually my vanilla ice cream, it doesn't hurt because i am the who voluntarily do it,but you know it still scary when she asked me to do it.

          WeebMonsieur ikr. she hates when i take her sweetened water when i stay at her house. took it once i swear she glared at me like i killed her father, after that never took anything without permission but she is sweet though.

          Neverfire7 Don't do it ,destroy his relationship ┬┴┬┴┤(・_├┬┴┬┴ do it I swear I am your demon not random stranger talking in the dark.

          Neverfire7 Welcome to the Twilight the Realm between Light and Darkness Unfortunately the tax have both the deficit of both realm ,so it's much more terrible here.
          You off better with one of them. (/ _ ; ) It's bad here.

          WeebMonsieur The glare of the reaper will pierce the Heaven,the sky,the mountains,the earth,and it will stop to stood before your crumbling soul which shiver in fright ,horror and most importantly the guilt of what you have done.

          -@WeebMonsieur November 13 2017 RIP

          Neverfire7 You..... what have you done! Didn't you read the scripture that is written on the ston..forum!
          YOU HAVE DOOM US ALL!!!。:゚(。ノω\。)゚・。(SFX crying), RUN WHILE YOU STILL CAN!! ,EVERY MAN FOR HIMSELF!!

          Neverfire7 i have been dumped:(
          Even though it is just till i get better but the pain ... i have a cold so she says she dont want no cold and i should stay away. The cold nights taunt me my friend

            Neverfire7 i feel like shit, but on the bright side i guess i don't have to go to work now and i can start reading sovereign of the three realms raw and give u guys more levels.

            zswaleh I've stop working for the navy and now i am a millennium cultivator, by the way thx for the news!
            ヾ(⌐■_■)ノ♪♬ it's celebration time!

            zswaleh You sir' just scared me! That was suddenヽ(゚ー゚ヽ),you stopped my celebration party ,
            Hope you get well fast thou .
            Here an Immortal blessing from heaven!!! (ノ>ω<)ノ :。・:
            :・゚’★,。・:*:♪・゚’☆)゚O゚)!

            #GET WELL SOON!

            Monster paradise will be updated again. But i was correct for the most part

            Also running out of novels that i know of the cultivation realms. Gonna have to slow down the updates. Sorry

              4 days later

              IMMORTAL MORTAL
              UlTIMATE SCHEMING SYSTEM
              THE MAGUS ERA
              WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD
              has been made.

              if u think i made a mistake plz do tell

              WAR SOVEREIGN SOARING THE HEAVENS
              A MORTALS JOURNEY TO IMMORTALITY
              STEALING THE HEAVENS
              has been made

              do tell if you think i made a mistake

              Neverfire7 went on a rambage and posted 7 novels. lol . finally feeling better so u will see more and more coming

              I think that this would work a lot a better as a fandom wikia. Also noticed that in Warlock of the Magus World you have "Breaking Down Magus", ahah.

                Klepar planing on doing that fandom wikia too. right now finals coming so a little busy

                  zswaleh

                  Nice! A basic web page filled with posts! That's a great first step! I'm glad you followed through with it!

                  Now, a few things you can look forward into establishing:

                  1) A page for [Table of Contents] linking to different novel rankings (sorted alphabetically). Right now, you have a page with all the list, but they're sorted by the date published. Its a mess trying to find novels' names when they're not sorted.

                  2) The coloring scheme you had here hurts the eyes :S Look up more info about color contrasts.
                  screenshot

                  3) Format your lists. Use tables. Use bullets (like how you did with Warlock of the Magus World). Use extra paragraph spacing to note where one realm changes to another realm. Group up all Levels that are in the same realm together. It'll be easier on the eye and more intuitive. I like how you used different coloring, but it's not as intuitive as spacing alone. I'll give you an example from the picture above (with some added made-up info):

                  Lower Realm
                    - Qi Condensation
                       > Stage 1-9
                       > Stage 10 = Perfection. Idk. I'm making something up for a sub-level here. 
                    - Foundation Establishment
                    - Core Formation
                    - Nascent Soul
                    - Deity Transformation
                                                   <---(Note the extra space here to separate the Lower Realm from Middle)
                  Middle Realm
                    - Void Level
                    - Integration Level
                    - Great Ascension Level
                  
                  Higher Realm
                    - Immortals
                  
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                  Do you see how easy it is to distinguish where each realm is through spacing alone? Adding an extra
                  space between each section and single-spacing each list allows the brain to easily distinguish groups 
                  apart. 
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                  Looking over it now... I think maybe an actual Wikipedia/GitHub page would be nice. That way users from all over the world can contribute in. That's for another time though. Keep up the good work! You might consider having a comment section for each novel for people to contribute to so that way it'll help you as you make new pages for those novels.

                    Why not add a menu bar (different pages) for different kinds of novels? Scrolling down is a bit...long? xD

                    Just wondering

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