The ones I noted :
Zuo Shan Ke => Mountain Sitting Guest
Nine dome tome or Nine Calamity tome => No idea, is this the nameless manual ?
Master of the universe => Universe master
Burgrave of primal city or Castellan => Primal Chaos City Leader
Spiritual force leader => Spirit Reader
Laws of time/space => time/space laws
Time pause => time stop
Bran => Bolan
Sensor => Scanner
Ran Shen => Nan Shen
Sky tower => Star tower
Thanks for the translation, there's some improvements. But please for the love of god could you not ever use again the term castellan, it's by far the worst one, use Primal Chaos City Leader.