My new novel please review and share
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Dashing_Knight
Want to do a review swap?
This is my link
https://www.webnovel.com/book/ouroboros-the-book-of-david_26234193606727305
Junni_MC thank you 
If you like fanfictions of Naruto give it a go. The MC reincarnates in Naruto world with the karma seal of Shibai Otsutsuki, the Otsutsuki god. He reincarnates around the timeline of the second shinobi war.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/reborn-in-naruto-with-karma-seal_25988733406840105
TranslatorKun sure then please do mine
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-extra-author-chronicles_26229502105473105
LordShivaStories Romance is my not genre so, I only read the first three chapters. Very well written almost like someone who has been writing for a long time now. Very easy to read and understand.
But if you want to improve, your synopsis can be better in my opinion, like read this novel's synopsis.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/destroying-my-own-novel_23695910606616005
Secondly, the formatting of the system dialogue boxes can be a bit better like line breaks and indentation while writing it. You can read some other web novels to see how they show their system dialogue boxes etc.
TranslatorKun don't worry I labelled it as there would be an harem otherwise it is purely fantasy with adventure and action
TranslatorKun also this is one of my favorite novels
Here's mine. I'm a young writer who just started and would love feedback.
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Please I need reviews on my story "He Is My Obsession". https://m.webnovel.com/book/he-is-my-obsession_26186666605325905
Would you like to do a review swap with me?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-awakening-of-the-end_26251249705533005
hi, this is my link
https://www.webnovel.com/book/god’s-forgotten-son_26258606205555605
I'll read yours too. thank you
Trinit33 I left a review for your story. The strongest aspect of your writing is being able to set up the atmosphere of a scene.
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BS_Entertainment I've reviewed your story. You have such a great talent for describing the mental state of your characters. Your use of symbolism and metaphors added a lot of depth to your story.