LordShivaStories Romance is my not genre so, I only read the first three chapters. Very well written almost like someone who has been writing for a long time now. Very easy to read and understand.
But if you want to improve, your synopsis can be better in my opinion, like read this novel's synopsis.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/destroying-my-own-novel_23695910606616005
Secondly, the formatting of the system dialogue boxes can be a bit better like line breaks and indentation while writing it. You can read some other web novels to see how they show their system dialogue boxes etc.

      Trinit33 I left a review for your story. The strongest aspect of your writing is being able to set up the atmosphere of a scene.

          BS_Entertainment I've reviewed your story. You have such a great talent for describing the mental state of your characters. Your use of symbolism and metaphors added a lot of depth to your story.

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