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Your story is interesting, I am reading Chapter 2. And you have already managed to post 23 chapters in 18 days. That's fast.

I have made comments on Chapter 1, by the way.

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      MagusBahaghari
      http://wbnv.in/a/21hdpA1
      Alizeh has a storm inside fighting to take over. She's quiet, meek, and scared to death... until one day, she isn't. She has a problem. She's in love with two men.

      Genève is angry at the world. She would watch it burn, for just one more moment with Talon. She's being led by forces, no one understands. Her destiny is tugging and pulling her every which way. She feels as-if, she is living someone else's life. She wishes she were.

      Trixie, see's evil. She sees true goodness. She sees people for who they are, not who they pretend to be. Trixie see's a lot more than the average person, but she doesn't notice love triangles. She's falling hard for Cade. He seems to feel the same way. Too bad, to be together, they would be risking the destruction of all life, on all planets.

      Each of these women is truly unique. They come from different dimensions and upbringings. Their magical abilities vary greatly -as do their weaknesses.

      The common denominator- is a little thing called destiny. Theirs are completely intertwined. They also each had at least one abusive or neglectful parent. Oh, and then there's Zeek. all three know Zeek. He is part of their destiny, also. He is the one who sets things into motion.

      Geneve bore Zeek's son and became an evil queen. Tragedy and pain turned her into a monster.

      Alizeh snuck a nap in Zeek's barn after running away from home. She flawlessly switched dimensions, completely unaware. Potionless dimensional travel was thought to be impossible.

      Trixie was rescued from demon minions, and an asylum, by Zeek. She didn't think anyone would ever believe her about her powers. Zeek, made her feel normal.

      Something was brewing, and shifting. Unprepared and unaware, the pendulum started to swing. Destiny waits for no one.

      Thank you!!

        MagusBahaghari Thank you so much. Well, most of top author even do 14 or 21 chap/week, so im still in the entry level.

        Anyway, i'll make sure to drop by in yours too after i finished writing more.

            _Re_

            No worries. I am also writing drafts for succeeding chapters, which I will upload later.

                MagusBahaghari

                I have checked your novel. I am still reading it though.

                If I may be so bold as to ask for a review of my work, I would also give a review of your novel. I like the way you write reviews. 🙂

                    Violet_Ivory

                    Thank you!

                    Once I am done finishing my chapters to be uploaded later, I will leave a review of your novel.

                    Already checked your review, by the way. Thank you!

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