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Grandmasters Will do it, my story's title is Living With Death
Need honest feedback
TheWriter117 It sounds like an obligatory review. Just one chapter isn't enough to judge a romance book. I know what I wrote and it was written with an intension in mind. It is a character driven book rather than world driven. I can't review your. This is unacceptable.
The reason why I have only read one chapter is because I have only written one chapter on my story. It would be unfair that I have to read multiple chapters for that review while you only read one.
TheWriter117 And it's fair to leave a harsh review in the name of 'honest' review after reading just one chapter.
That's unfair to my book.
TheWriter117 Feel free to delete alk the Pointers and review you left. I won't be using it
It's not really unfair because the review is literally specifed to be only based on one chapter.
If you think I'm petty enough to do that just shows you what kind of person you are
TheWriter117 You said you only read one chapter because YOUR book had ONLY ONE chapter to offer. You did it 'cause, for you it was 'UNFAIR' and now I m Petty 
I was just complying with your idea if FAIRNESS.
A review based on the first for a review based on the first chapter? How is it not fair? Answer that with non fallacious valid arguments. Besides the first chapter is important, they set the story in stone along with the direction, characters, and tone. Your story meanwhile tried to do that but failed miserably and pathetically. An inconsistent prose, plot going to multiple places without clarity and flair, and a terribly executed time skip. Your main character is the only thing that is good yet even that's not really a high bar. You gave her a defined personality, cool, but she lacks a well established growth. From a warrior princess to suddenly fighting battles that gets skimmed over because you are a writer who can't be bothered to even give your story's tone and personality. So far you just whining and being petty because I gave a negative review
TheWriter117 Is it tho? Well, go ahead and imagine whatever gives you the sense of justification. It's a waste of tym anyways
Great you cannot give out any valid arguments. Good luck with your story
Alright, I'm not pulling anything back. Ready?
TheWriter117 Sure, I'm a bit busy this past few days but I'll read your story and give some feedbacks. I hope you'll do the same.
Ruemari_Cordan Living With Death has only one chapter currently so no need to fret over about the length. About to read yours.
TheWriter117 I already done reading and giving feedback to your story and to be honest it's interesting, hoping to read more, but maybe I can wait.
Ruemari_Cordan Thank you
theword_witch Don't worry. You are doing really great with your story. Accept or reject any review you like. All the para comments and reviews can be deleted.
JA_Chrysant Thank you, I got your review. Want anything reviewed?
Grandmasters Sure. Have added it to my library, and will review it by next Sunday. Here's my link -
https://www.webnovel.com/book/moonlit-identity_26163746606485205
Lullienoom I am very interested in that. Also, I missed seeing your book in the library. I guess for a while it got removed. I even searched for it.
Happy to see the omegaverse back. Please go through the continuing chapters of 'Moonlit Identity'. I will do the same and let you know via para comments.