Need honest feedback
Hello! Please read my novel "Spared by the Tyrant" it's romance, pls check out if you are over 18. I am looking for potential readers and I would be happy to hear your thoughts!
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/26416932605043005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4311591734
Flattened_Rice_007
Hi, I really love writing stories especially a teenfiction or youth drama. I also want an honest feedback about my stories, even if it's a harsh or not as long as I can improve as a writer it's much better. I appreciate it if you try to read my stories and give reviews/ honest feedback.
This is the link for my stories:
Link: http://wbnv.in/a/79hg9BV
Title: Playful Romance
Link: http://wbnv.in/a/3ahg9Bq
Title: I'm still in love with my ex
Note: You might encounter some typo/grammatical error since I'm in the middle of editing it. But if you won't mind, please read it. I'll be glad to read yours just drop your link and I'll give you an honest review. Thank you in advance.
Ruemari_Cordan Thanks for the review. Will read and review by Monday for sure. Adding it to my library right now.
theword_witch Loved your story and left a review too. The politics and drama of the book is perfect. And the story is very-very well constructed.
Hope the story continues to advance in same way. Kindly go through my story too.
Flattened_Rice_007 Now, I did read yours, whoo... that took me long enough and i also recreated my novel to be more better written than it was.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/zero-degrees-celsius_26376860105922105###
Flattened_Rice_007 yup. U ll have a review soon.
Thank you for your kind words. It means alot.
It'll help me a lot to improve if some of you provide me honest feedbacks too.
http://wbnv.in/a/ffhfmsT
Please read mine as well, Title is Living With Death. I'm about to read your book
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I will read yours. Please read mine, thank you. Title is Living With Death
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I will read yours, please read mine as well. Give an honest review. The title is Living With Death
Flattened_Rice_007 A while back I already read your story and left a review but if you want further critique like a beta reader let me know
TheWriter117 Ok. But, I will be able to do that tomorrow. Does that work for you?
Anyone want a review swap? Add it to your library:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/sketch-s-1_26439906806360805
And I really hope you read my story.
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I just started a book and I would like to know how my writing is, Hope you can reply soon. This goes for anyone and everyone else too.
The book is called "An empire never seen before"
Flattened_Rice_007 I just left a review. Something came up so I had to pause for a bit, apologies for the delay.
I have to say, the way your writing builds up the tension... Awesome. Keep it up.
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Violi I read the first chapter but haven't left a review yet. I think I'll have to at least read a chapter or two more since all we know about the MC is her name and that she is a writer.
theword_witch Thank you