theword_witch

A review based on the first for a review based on the first chapter? How is it not fair? Answer that with non fallacious valid arguments. Besides the first chapter is important, they set the story in stone along with the direction, characters, and tone. Your story meanwhile tried to do that but failed miserably and pathetically. An inconsistent prose, plot going to multiple places without clarity and flair, and a terribly executed time skip. Your main character is the only thing that is good yet even that's not really a high bar. You gave her a defined personality, cool, but she lacks a well established growth. From a warrior princess to suddenly fighting battles that gets skimmed over because you are a writer who can't be bothered to even give your story's tone and personality. So far you just whining and being petty because I gave a negative review

    Lullienoom I am very interested in that. Also, I missed seeing your book in the library. I guess for a while it got removed. I even searched for it.
    Happy to see the omegaverse back. Please go through the continuing chapters of 'Moonlit Identity'. I will do the same and let you know via para comments.

      TheWriter117 Read yours. Got especially interested due to your conversation with another writer.
      You story is really interesting. I hope to read further soon, to know how the world of others turns upside down due to death's unconventional decision.

      Note: My first chapter too won't tell much. Would request you to read atleast two, along with the synopsis. And then let me know your thoughts.

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