Alright, I'm not pulling anything back. Ready?
Need honest feedback
TheWriter117 Sure, I'm a bit busy this past few days but I'll read your story and give some feedbacks. I hope you'll do the same.
Ruemari_Cordan Living With Death has only one chapter currently so no need to fret over about the length. About to read yours.
TheWriter117 I already done reading and giving feedback to your story and to be honest it's interesting, hoping to read more, but maybe I can wait.
Ruemari_Cordan Thank you
theword_witch Don't worry. You are doing really great with your story. Accept or reject any review you like. All the para comments and reviews can be deleted.
JA_Chrysant Thank you, I got your review. Want anything reviewed?
Grandmasters Sure. Have added it to my library, and will review it by next Sunday. Here's my link -
https://www.webnovel.com/book/moonlit-identity_26163746606485205
Lullienoom I am very interested in that. Also, I missed seeing your book in the library. I guess for a while it got removed. I even searched for it.
Happy to see the omegaverse back. Please go through the continuing chapters of 'Moonlit Identity'. I will do the same and let you know via para comments.
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Flattened_Rice_007 Sure, if you can reread the chapters, please do it, they suffer some changes that affected the new ones that I uploaded, and thank you!!! 
TheWriter117 Read yours. Got especially interested due to your conversation with another writer.
You story is really interesting. I hope to read further soon, to know how the world of others turns upside down due to death's unconventional decision.
Note: My first chapter too won't tell much. Would request you to read atleast two, along with the synopsis. And then let me know your thoughts.
Ruemari_Cordan Left you a review. For the honest feedback, have left a few para comments. Please feel free to delete whenever done with them.
Also, one suggestion would be to please download Grammarly free version or use its desktop site to revisit the chapters individually. Once the basic edits are done, the flow should be much smoother.
Happy writing to you 
review swap anyone ?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/rise-of-idan-nigeria's-reign_26432474505097105
NPCs Will do, but would be able to review by next Sunday. Have added the book to my library. Do the same for 'Moonlit Identity'.
Will ping after dropping the review.
Flattened_Rice_007 done the review for yours already
Can someone provide me with some comparative feedbacks between my first and the lastets chapter??
Beyond The Unknowns
http://wbnv.in/a/ffhfmsT
About to read it now.