Hello, this is my story. Thank you!
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/26379283006167605?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4318395548
I wanna review, send your story link here!
I'm lacking by a margin and only in recent chapters have I improved a bit. So please do review mine.
Beyond The Unknowns
http://wbnv.in/a/ffhfmsT
Please do mine. Title is Living With Death
JA_Chrysant it's rare to get honest feedback when you really need it. thanks for the corrections
Valentine_24
Okay! After reading 5 chapters, the story so far is intriguing. But the setting and character could be fleshed out more. It had so much potential, please continue writing, Author!
JA_Chrysant
Hi, I really love writing stories especially a teenfiction or youth drama. I also want an honest feedback about my stories, even if it's a harsh or not as long as I can improve as a writer it's much better. I appreciate it if you try to read my stories and give reviews/ honest feedback.
This is the link for my stories:
Link: http://wbnv.in/a/79hg9BV
Title: Playful Romance
Link: http://wbnv.in/a/3ahg9Bq
Title: I'm still in love with my ex
Note: You might encounter some typo/grammatical error since I'm in the middle of editing it. But if you won't mind, please read it. I'll be glad to read yours just drop your link and I'll give you an honest review. Thank you in advance.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/zero-degrees-celsius_26376860105922105
it's about two kids surviving a freezing world full of monsters.
JA_Chrysant thank you very much for the criticism and the advices. I'll adjust the first two chapter. Thank you again!
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Grandmasters
I read it. It honestly good! But I think you start the world-building too early and rushed the plot at prologue. The world-building can wait later hehe. Though once it reach 5 chapters, I could say more.
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DottierPeak
I finished reading it. The world building is amazing! But, good sir, the pacing is too slow. 4 chapters and not anything really happened beside the world building. Till the end, I honestly confused... who's the protagonist?
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Bloom07
I haven't read the previous version, but your story premise is interesting. Hmm, but I feel like reading an observational report rather than a novel. Perhaps you could follow your favorite novel and tried his way of writing?
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TheWriter117
I finished reading it. Your story have good premise, what if death took a vacation? Hahaha. It's also has details that I like. I would like to read more, and if it reach 5 chapters, i could finally review it. Keep up the good work, Author!
JA_Chrysant the protagonist is James but yes I can see why you think is confusing. I'll try to adjust the chapters.
Hey, if you don't mind the genre as an editor here is mine
https://m.webnovel.com/book/alpha-longing-(bl-omegaverse)_26242874206751005
Valentine_24 I didn't know you have an story, I added to my collection. Later I'm going to read it 
Ruemari_Cordan
I finished reading I'm still in love with my Ex (well to chapter 5), and boy, it's cute! But I think the key in romance novel is the character and chasing pace. For now, there is no chasing yet, but as for character... I still find it difficult to love the character. It'd probably because there's still no gap in the personality that makes the character distinctive and memorable (For example, Gia, the Kaichou could be uptight and strict, but she secretly ### etc). Keep up the good work, Author!
SevenZeros
Wow, the premise is interesting. I like it! But the writing could use some works (It's still rigid). Try to follow your favorite author style, and by time, own it as yours. Don't give up, fighting!
Welp, time to sleep, see you guys tomorrow!! hehe
JA_Chrysant Thank you for the review and honest comment, I'll take note of everything. And I hope you didn't mind my comments and reviews to yours. It's my own opinion and I didn't mean to offend you in any ways. So, it's up to you if you'll listen to it. Maybe, I might be wrong. Anyway, thank you again.