I want to read stories to learn how to become an editor and beat Grammarly. But there are thousands of novels in webnovel!! So please, put your book here. I'll gladly read, comment, collect, and review the book.

Oh yeah, this is my book, hope you'll enjoy it!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/ideal-white_26088069705987805

    Valentine_24
    Okay! After reading 5 chapters, the story so far is intriguing. But the setting and character could be fleshed out more. It had so much potential, please continue writing, Author!

      JA_Chrysant
      Hi, I really love writing stories especially a teenfiction or youth drama. I also want an honest feedback about my stories, even if it's a harsh or not as long as I can improve as a writer it's much better. I appreciate it if you try to read my stories and give reviews/ honest feedback.

      This is the link for my stories:

      Link: http://wbnv.in/a/79hg9BV
      Title: Playful Romance

      Link: http://wbnv.in/a/3ahg9Bq
      Title: I'm still in love with my ex

      Note: You might encounter some typo/grammatical error since I'm in the middle of editing it. But if you won't mind, please read it. I'll be glad to read yours just drop your link and I'll give you an honest review. Thank you in advance.

          Grandmasters
          I read it. It honestly good! But I think you start the world-building too early and rushed the plot at prologue. The world-building can wait later hehe. Though once it reach 5 chapters, I could say more.

            DottierPeak
            I finished reading it. The world building is amazing! But, good sir, the pacing is too slow. 4 chapters and not anything really happened beside the world building. Till the end, I honestly confused... who's the protagonist?

                Bloom07
                I haven't read the previous version, but your story premise is interesting. Hmm, but I feel like reading an observational report rather than a novel. Perhaps you could follow your favorite novel and tried his way of writing?

                    TheWriter117
                    I finished reading it. Your story have good premise, what if death took a vacation? Hahaha. It's also has details that I like. I would like to read more, and if it reach 5 chapters, i could finally review it. Keep up the good work, Author!

                      Ruemari_Cordan
                      I finished reading I'm still in love with my Ex (well to chapter 5), and boy, it's cute! But I think the key in romance novel is the character and chasing pace. For now, there is no chasing yet, but as for character... I still find it difficult to love the character. It'd probably because there's still no gap in the personality that makes the character distinctive and memorable (For example, Gia, the Kaichou could be uptight and strict, but she secretly ### etc). Keep up the good work, Author!

                          SevenZeros
                          Wow, the premise is interesting. I like it! But the writing could use some works (It's still rigid). Try to follow your favorite author style, and by time, own it as yours. Don't give up, fighting!

                              Welp, time to sleep, see you guys tomorrow!! hehe

                                JA_Chrysant Thank you for the review and honest comment, I'll take note of everything. And I hope you didn't mind my comments and reviews to yours. It's my own opinion and I didn't mean to offend you in any ways. So, it's up to you if you'll listen to it. Maybe, I might be wrong. Anyway, thank you again.

                                    JA_Chrysant Hey there, thank you for your review and insights on my novel. As a new writer, they always help me to see what kind of improvement I can make to the story. I know you aspire to be an editor, and that is really great, but in your journey, you must be clear about what kind of type of editor you want to be. When reviewing others' works, you need to take into count what is the style of writing and the style the author has. Also, you mentioned "show, don't tell," again, it's important to remember that "show, don't tell" is a guideline, not a hard-and-fast rule. There are times when telling can be more efficient or effective, especially, for example, in my prologue, where you may need to convey a lot of information quickly to set the stage for the rest of the story. There is always room for improvement, even for the most talented authors, but overall, it's also essential to preserve the voice of the author. Also, mostly the inciting incident that sets the story mostly happens around 20%, so you can't expect to know everything that is going to happen and understand just by reading the first three chapters of a novel that possibly can have 100+ chapters and more than 100,000 words. I hope this helps you with future reviews and helps other new writers, and does not discourage them in your journey to becoming an Editor.

                                        Jokerbud
                                        I finished reading the story. The story is fun and the system is well-made. How you describe the girls is quite... fascinating. But I think the main character is a bit too perverted. Maybe you could consider toning down his perverted nature?

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