Name: The Broken System
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12666120906495505
Please give it a try
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Really loved it! I had to study about Egypt (along with the rest of Africa) for a time and I haven't really seen a nice and funny web novel about it. I'm suddenly reminded of dressing up as Egyptian gods and historical figures with my whole class for a wax museum in elementary school...for loose change. Anyways, keep it up and continue writing! The comedy reminds me of "There is no Epic Loot here, Only Puns." by stewart92 on RoyalRoad although the protagonist over there hates mushrooms instead of lettuce lol.
Aw, now I miss Delta, time to go to RoyalRoad.
Title: Dead Roses
Summary: Risha Wei, a perfectionist with an uncaring cold attitude.
Andres Jaque, a sly and scheming man who will stop at nothing in order to get what he wants.
Dace Donovan, an intelligent and domineering man whose lacking in the EQ department.
The three most dominating figures of the business world go head in head within a battle; the fight for love.
Link:https://www.webnovel.com/book/11805280105538305/Dead-Roses
Would really appreciate any honest feedback!
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Good day and happy typing~! :)
ayyeeeee if anyoine wants to swap
How to be a good mortal father to your demon kids
Synopsis
Dear diary,
Today I was dragged into hell by a seven-foot tall man with four horns who yelled at me for abandoning my children.
Do you remember Yu Yang? yes, apparently she was a spider demon who got pregnant after our one-night stand and had a litter of seven babies...
Seven demon babies who are going to rule the underworld someday...
Hey, feel free to check out my story.
Brief Summary: It is a kingdom building story set in the seventeenth/eighteenth century. Follow Frederick as he attempts to protect his country and turn it into the greatest in the world.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12889674605840005
Feel free to review it too. Thanks
I got you mate. Done a review on yours and honestly it’s fun read.
Check mine out it’s not much but well I try
Hiya, I'm a new writer. Feel free to take a look:
Name: Scissor X Pencil X Pen
Blurb: The utensils in school have only one purpose: serving their owners.
But when Scissor learns that utensils are thrown away after being used, he rebels against his pencil case. His pencil case has always known about the reality of the world and they send out their assassin, Pencil, to hunt down and eliminate Scissor before he can bring chaos to the classroom through his rebellion.
Will Scissor be able to free the utensils of his classroom, or is he just a "naive, young utensil"?
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12899083206922805
It's a bit of a strange story, but I hope someone can find it enjoyable. I can't wait to read everybody else's stories too!
ZeroColours
Reminds me of a video I saw in elementary school hmm...>3</
Name of the novel: Crimson Love
Brief summary: Mark is passionate and doesn't let his flaws hold him back.Akio is flawless on the surface.However,when they both cross paths,they are lead through a series of rape,drugs and even murder.Could these individuals be hiding more than there seems to be?
BL storyFour unrelated university students are leading normal lives until destiny plays a game and throws them in dark,twisted web of love and betrayal.All have equally important roles to untangle others and themselves.The question is will they succeed?
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12631493005234005/Crimson-Love(BL)
Name of the novel: Even though you are crazy.
Brief Summary: Li Jun is a billionaire with secrets beyond his wife Yu Yan's wildest dreams.
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Hello! I'm a new writer! Please leave some constructive criticism on the chapter comments, review of my work, or reply here at my comment; so I could identify in which field I should improve! Thank you so much!
Name of the novel: God's Authority
Brief Summary: In a world wherein everything is granted with authority, and through cultivation, one can advance into higher authorities. Rael found himself in a bitter struggle as a Soulless.
Rael will now set his own journey to seek for his greater purpose. Along with other companions, a destiny greater than before awaits. A destiny that will alter the history of a new era.
The Soulless that rivals the God's Authority!
Link to the novel: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11940556306635105/God's-Authority
Free advertising. I'll take a shot :D
Title: Transition and Restart
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12652502605368205/Transition-and-Restart
Genre: Romance
Blurb: If you were transported from this world to another almost identical.
If you were transported from your life to your teenage self.
If you had to restart your life again.
Would you, or would you cling to your memories?
@FallenBlue Thank you so much for your kind words and review <3 im so happy you enjoyed the story so far!
I'd love to support your work as well and check it out if you would like!
Thanks again <3
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I hope you will like my novel..
TITLE :I wish I never exist
SUMMARY : it is a love story of a human and alien. A girl who is living a simple hopeless life falls in love with alien and finds she is something..
GENRE : romance, fantasy, suspension
LINK : https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12334922805286905
Maybe check mine out and review it. I'll review yours in turn
Title: The tale of Drogo Starblaze
Summary: A young soul died at the hands of his own loved one. Finally able to free himself from the shackle of pain and suffering but only to find his second life to be filled with the same pain as the first. Do Gods exist? If so then why is his life so miserable? If not, then who shall he complain to? Why was he reincarnated and if his fate is to repeat the same sufferings then what's the point? Alas, having a sister in this new world can change things maybe for the better or maybe for the worse. A hateful mother and a loving sister. Follow Drogo as be tries either tries to find the meaning of his life or plunge into the darkness that his heart has carried.
Hello~! Here to promote mine as well~
Name: Cross Worlds: The Tale of Two Boys Who Swapped Worlds
Brief summary: Two worlds: Earth and Sekai—a world where magic and technology coexist.
Two boys—Tachibana Yuri. An ordinary Japanese boy with a normal life, and has a love for manga.
Yuri Tachibana. A rebellious, short-tempered Third Prince of the Saishi Kingdom. He's known notoriously for his recklessness and punk-like behaviour, the headache of the royal family.
What will happen when they accidentally switch worlds? Chaos and hilarity of course.
[It's something similar to an isekai novel wherein the MC gets transported to another world involuntarily, but the difference is that neither of the MC die nor did a random summoning circle take them there.]
Link: Cross Worlds: The Tale of Two Boys Who Swapped Worlds
Thanks in advance for checking my story out!
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Novel: Monster Integration
Brief Info- In a world where magic exists, where you can bond with monsters and gain their powers, with every evolution you grew in power and get amazing power with every new monster you bond.
Micheal is starting a new adventure with his monster Ashlyn a chubby cute silver sparrow.
Watch his adventure, how he grew during his adventures and fight the countless battle with his partner.
Novel: Normal in Parenthesis
Synopsis:
"The world is unfair and unjust."
Gin Sakato, a high school student finds himself in a seemingly normal life. But everything changed just right after he was starting to discover his once lost emotions. With a life changing event, he faces the darkness of the reality and learn what is the reason of his being.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12466790606528905/Normal-in-Parenthesis