DragonImmortal Hey there! I gave your story a review and added your story to my library! I hope you won't mind a bit of constructive opinion. Though generally, your writing style is good so there were only a few flaws and nothing much struck me as too distracting to enjoy your story itself. Please keep up the good work!

      ForerunnerOfSky Hellooo, I added your story to my library! I'll give you after I update my stories for today hehehe Kindly wait, I'll reply to you again once I'm done with the review!

          ThreyaMidnight Also thanks for the honest review its the only way I can improve as a writer because its too easy for me to overlook my own weaknesses, just be sure to drop a link to your novel if you want me to review yours. Thanks

              ThreyaMidnight Hey again, I normally leave reviews that focus on the author's strong points and the actual story, but I went ahead and added in some grammar, punctuation, and writing flow feedback to help you improve your writing. I also pointed out a few specific comments, paragraph comments, in the first half of Chapter One to make things easier to pinpoint. I'm looking forward to how you develop the story and how the characters grow over time!

                  ForerunnerOfSky Hello, good evening/day, I made a review of your story! I hope you take my advice into consideration and not take it not as an insult but a suggestion for improvements 🙁(( It was a nice read, thank you for gracing me with such work!

                      DragonImmortal Oh, it's fine! I actually appreciate that you made the effort to give my story a read and a review (and even comments, wow!). Thank you so much for allotting your precious time just to read mine. I will take your constructive criticism to heart. Once again, thank you.

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