I feel like that's definitely within my ability to do. i mean what are vampire without bloodline traits lol. my main concern would just be about the depth of the seals placed on him and the other elders because you stated that they also have powerful special seals on them as well, correct?

i mean outside of an enriched and more full world building unless you plan on unsealing them eventually will and using every clan, do you need detailed information for all the bloodlines? i mean hell after being sealed for so long, and there being only one Dracula left, who is to say that the bloodlines didn't mutate? like a fire bloodline that could remove poison ended up becoming a poisonous yin fire bloodline from being sealed and having so much pent up rage and frustration?

mmm.. sorry i digress, all i can say is that there is a lot of room for anything to happen in your novel lol. one of the reasons vampires tend to be hunted in my novels is because their blood can be used like a potion and when mixed with herbs there are near no side affects. because of that many other races hunt them down and lock them away to farm them.

until i have a more clear understanding of why your (powerful AF) vampires where locked away i wont be sure the best way to pitch ideas hahaha. you just say what you're thinking and i'll just dump info or lore in your direction lol just let me know

    SinfuLeeCerebral Wow. I never realised how much potential for growth and a fuck up this novel has should things go sideways with my writing. As for the sealing of the vampires,I did not want to make it to complicated, choosing to build on what I have already put in place. There was a war. But this time the instigator of the war are the same people who lost it. Vampires could be considered apex existences, with their superior speed,strength, senses and a talent for the dark side of the magical arts,they are bound to be prideful, overconfident and headstrong. But just like humanity, they will want more,need more. they fought with the intention to subjugate sherath, effectively being the first empire to come into existence. Then they made enemies of the other races of the first sun in the process.

    As for their bloodlines I really think mutations are a good way to go.so they would have their base bloodline that's been mutated,not just because of the seal,but also because of the mineral mountain and the enchantments on it. Thanks for your help I really appreciate it.
    I'm taking a three day break from Friday through Sunday.I well start posting chapters again on Monday, but not as much since I also have to update my other novel. thanks once again,and God bless you.

      Vampires really are among the top races. but i digress, if you need any more back and forth in the future just let me know. i live for stuff like this lol. best of luck to you, blessed be

        Finally got a chance to step into the forum page. I think you have unlimited potential with your story. So far your vampires are awesome and appear to be more then the standard vampire. I glad to be reading this novel, hard to find a decent vampire story that is original.

          TheNill I'm glad you like it. If you have any ideas or suggestions for the novel please do tell me. Most of the time I have no idea what I'm doing. Thanks

              [unknown] It would be interesting to see the man who Kael ate, have his son enter into the story. Perhaps have him even join Kael, or become another enemy.
              What has happened to the tower in this time? Does it enter into the mind bonds he has going with the two girls?
              Just a couple thoughts you probably already have in the works.

                Sdrawkcab I do have such plans. His son will show up eventually, but whether as an enemy or an ally is up for debate.
                As for the tower it's currently still bonding with the spirit crystal, so another three or four days in the novel, and it should be done.
                I have no plans of having anybody other than him control the tower, at least for the moment. For the girls to have access, would be to convenient and easy.

                  That was a good flash back well done. Now I'm ready for the next flash back where he is betrayed by his wife.

                    TheNill slow down, Nil. I don't want to rush, and who ever said he was betrayed. Look underneath the underneath

                        Anone not like a real betrayal in honesty but from his prospective and with his memories gone I'm sure he would feel that she betrayed him at least without her side of the story I personally would feel betrayed.

                            You are also right I get ahead of the game this is one of my top reads so I'm eager for more. Sorry I'm impatient my wife tells me to slow down all the time.

                              TheNill I feel sorry for you brother. I don't have a wife, I'm just 20,but my sister's and my mom tell me the same thing. It's usually always ends up embarrassing me.

                                  Anone it's life. Work work work is mostly what I do so I'm always in a hurry. Family is a good thing though make sure you try and enjoy your time with them.

                                      TheNill I know, ever since my dad died, my sisters and mom, were all I could think about. Family makes us stronger.

                                        I look forward to him growing his base of people around the tower. Take your time to grow the story before publishing it so you don't write into a corner. Having said that, I look forward to reading more. 😊

                                          Sdrawkcab thats a good idea, as soon as I reach a hundred views, I will do just that. I will take some time off to write, before publishing it again.

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