Moon08 Your story is interesting, A world of System. You give a good hook for me in the early chapters. The plot moved at the right pace.

Too bad you don't use System in the title, or you would be more popularity, but your synopsis helped that. I still don't get the Giagantis or the Gambit thing.

For the cover it is very nice! That adds fantasy imagination.

The choice of words in your novel is great. I loved that. I only suggest to use more Enter Button. There were some place where Enter could be used. Other than that, This Rabbink is the one who needs to learn from you. Lol.

    demi

    TheAdventurer

    These two are Senpai. This Rabbink couldn't comment but only learn.

    demi is a crazy author with multiple top ranking novels and even crazy all were being maintained.

    QingQing is famous for the special covers. Gwahahaha.

          Tribe Online: Conquer The World

          Tags: Video Games, Male Lead, Romance, Action, Adventure

          Synopsis:

          Shi Xieren is a runner athlete.
          He starting running at the age of 8.
          At the age of 10 he starting to attend the running competition.
          At the age of 12 he become the fastest in the Zhoushan.
          At the age of 13 he become the fastest in the Zhejiang province.
          At the age of 14 he become the fastest in the China.
          At the age of 15 he become the fastest in the Asia.
          At the age of 16 he become the fastest in the World.
          At the age of 17 he stopped running because of some incident which make him could not run anymore.
          But his legend doesn't stop here. He stopped running in the real world but he continues running in the virtual world.
          Join Shi Xieren, the fastest runner in his age creating his Legend in the virtual world.

          Tribe Online: Conquer The World

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            LemonGrenade there are some thread that dedicated for promote your novel. You can go and advertise your novel there 😉

                The Planetfall Generation

                280 years ago a colony ship left earth for a faraway planet. On the ship allocation of all resources is decided within the game called Eden Dream. The ship will arrive on the planet in twenty years, during the next twenty years on the ship our protagonist has to get herself into a favorable position for planetfall.

                https://www.webnovel.com/book/11309077906322305

                Good luck to everyone in the competition!

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                  I'm confused. According to OP, only editors should post here. It seems to me, however, that authors are self-announcing their stories instead. Did OP perhaps mean: "Authors shall post. . . ." instead of: "Editors shall post. . . ." ??? Is it okay for me to announce my entry here, or do I need to seek someone's permission first?

                      MC_Shael I think this is the place where Author put their entry. This would increase their reader. It used to be in the other thread, but it mixed with comment about the contest itself. This one thread also allowed to easy find some novel.

                          Hey all,
                          My first ever novel! It's about school life in a future society, where video games (Augmented Reality and Virtual Reality) have a really, really significant place in life. And what's a lighthearted novel without an overpowered MC, and a bit of contrast with the struggles of a society adapting to war?

                          Ads are getting smarting, I'm telling you :)

                          My book: WAR Breaker

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                          I hope that you enjoy. All feedback is greatly appreciated (be as brutally honest as you want).
                          Edit: Sorry for rambling on, but I'll try to get more chapters out. I'm too slow at editing.

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