Moon08 Your story is interesting, A world of System. You give a good hook for me in the early chapters. The plot moved at the right pace.

Too bad you don't use System in the title, or you would be more popularity, but your synopsis helped that. I still don't get the Giagantis or the Gambit thing.

For the cover it is very nice! That adds fantasy imagination.

The choice of words in your novel is great. I loved that. I only suggest to use more Enter Button. There were some place where Enter could be used. Other than that, This Rabbink is the one who needs to learn from you. Lol.

    demi

    TheAdventurer

    These two are Senpai. This Rabbink couldn't comment but only learn.

    demi is a crazy author with multiple top ranking novels and even crazy all were being maintained.

    QingQing is famous for the special covers. Gwahahaha.

          Tribe Online: Conquer The World

          Tags: Video Games, Male Lead, Romance, Action, Adventure

          Synopsis:

          Shi Xieren is a runner athlete.
          He starting running at the age of 8.
          At the age of 10 he starting to attend the running competition.
          At the age of 12 he become the fastest in the Zhoushan.
          At the age of 13 he become the fastest in the Zhejiang province.
          At the age of 14 he become the fastest in the China.
          At the age of 15 he become the fastest in the Asia.
          At the age of 16 he become the fastest in the World.
          At the age of 17 he stopped running because of some incident which make him could not run anymore.
          But his legend doesn't stop here. He stopped running in the real world but he continues running in the virtual world.
          Join Shi Xieren, the fastest runner in his age creating his Legend in the virtual world.

          Tribe Online: Conquer The World

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            LemonGrenade there are some thread that dedicated for promote your novel. You can go and advertise your novel there 😉

                The Planetfall Generation

                280 years ago a colony ship left earth for a faraway planet. On the ship allocation of all resources is decided within the game called Eden Dream. The ship will arrive on the planet in twenty years, during the next twenty years on the ship our protagonist has to get herself into a favorable position for planetfall.

                https://www.webnovel.com/book/11309077906322305

                Good luck to everyone in the competition!

                  WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL
                  I'm confused. According to OP, only editors should post here. It seems to me, however, that authors are self-announcing their stories instead. Did OP perhaps mean: "Authors shall post. . . ." instead of: "Editors shall post. . . ." ??? Is it okay for me to announce my entry here, or do I need to seek someone's permission first?

                      MC_Shael I think this is the place where Author put their entry. This would increase their reader. It used to be in the other thread, but it mixed with comment about the contest itself. This one thread also allowed to easy find some novel.

                          Hey all,
                          My first ever novel! It's about school life in a future society, where video games (Augmented Reality and Virtual Reality) have a really, really significant place in life. And what's a lighthearted novel without an overpowered MC, and a bit of contrast with the struggles of a society adapting to war?

                          Ads are getting smarting, I'm telling you :)

                          My book: WAR Breaker

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                          I hope that you enjoy. All feedback is greatly appreciated (be as brutally honest as you want).
                          Edit: Sorry for rambling on, but I'll try to get more chapters out. I'm too slow at editing.

                          MasterRabbink Thank you for the info! I really hope other authors are aware of this.

                          I'd like to announce that my original work Gaia Online was entered into the writing prompts contest number 3, two days ago. Please read on, or click on the cover to go to the book's dedicated page.

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                          Synopsis

                          In the future, mixed reality and advanced AI is everywhere. A new invention FuSe, promises to take virtual worlds to a new level: Total immersion. The device, however, has a fatal flow. It tends to kill its users.

                          Blake Wilson is one of many illegal test subjects. He and others must spend a year attached to FuSe, mainly in Gaia Online, a virtual reality MMORPG set in a medieval fantasy world.

                          Among the test subjects, some seek fame, some seek wealth, some seek adventure, some seek escape, and some even seek visceral violence. Blake seeks none of that. Blake is a broken man who seeks salvation, either in life, or in death.

                          It turns out, not everything is what it seems. Gaia Online has two faces, and there are fates much worse than a broken man.

                              VastoGrim Lol. There is a 'Nigerian Prince' who need help, he made a link above my post, but a mod had delete the link above me, therefore an accidental victim appeared.

                              dapenggaofei Can you remove my post above? An accidental victim happened. @dapenggaofei

                              I think your pickle slayer hurt me... Please give me some enter sword to slash it. :P

                              On a serious note, I think you need to break the sentences using dot '.' instead of ','. Also use the Enter weapon to cut those paragraph.

                              I don't think I could see the plot line since it was just 1 chapter at this time. It seems you will add some comedy/absurdity in it. Ganbare.

                                    MasterRabbink Second chapter already released, tried taken into account your advices, I look forward to your thoughts on it.

                                        Anone There is someone who write a link to outside 'scam' sites. Our mod had delete it.

                                        Who else would give a dangerous link to outside site other than the generous 'Nigerian Prince' who need someone to help him transfer some money to overseas but you have to pay some 'transaction fee' first for him?

                                        (You haven't ever got the 'Nigerian Prince' email? He said he was Nigerian, but if you could trace it would appear in other country. Lol.)

                                        Try to search Nigerian Prince Meme on Google!

                                            The Steel Throne
                                            https://www.webnovel.com/book/11326209406328405/The-Steel-Throne

                                            Synopsis:
                                            An Arch God reincarnated (he is the main hero from 1st contest entry, also reincarnated to a cinderella in the second entry, this time the third reincarnation.) into a body of a professional eSport MOBA player.

                                            Short Novel. Only 4-5 Chapters Planed. No MOBA Knowledge required. This novel is completed without the need to read the main reincarnation novel.

                                            High Usage of CURSES. You have been warned. Kids should not read.

                                            To read past reincarnation: Endless Universes - Phoenix Rebirth Path - The 4325th
                                            https://www.webnovel.com/book/11181310806281605

                                            To read his second reincarnation as a Cinderella. Gwahahaha. (Different Ending than the above novel).
                                            Cinderella Idol (Completed Novel) - https://www.webnovel.com/book/11258420506307005/

                                            This is to promote my main novel:
                                            Endless Universes - Young Master Path - The 1368th
                                            https://www.webnovel.com/book/10935403706210205

                                              MasterRabbink wow, my country has been given a bad name. We gave princes, but they're not as mainstream as like maybe the royal family of England. We don't even care about royalty.
                                              Shame on those guys, shame I say.
                                              I feel embarrassed, but that's just the choice made by a few, even if we're killing ourselves, we're more than just scammers. On behalf of my people I apologize for the bad eggs. Please don't judge us based on the actions of a few useless jackasses. Thanks😊😊😊😊😊

                                                  SweetsTomato there are many kingdoms in Nigeria. Some of them even extinct.
                                                  Prime example would be the current Benin kingdom, or the forgotten Nok tribe with their terracotta sculptures. Or my own tribe, the Igala people, who I'm proud to say once ruled the entire southern basin of my country. But now we're almost forgotten.

                                                    Anone Most the scammer is not Nigerian. Lol. Usually they were in the country with high cyber crime. Including My Country. Gwahahaha.

                                                        I guess I'll give this contest a try. Novel name - Invasion Wars
                                                        https://www.webnovel.com/book/11329752506329805/Invasion-Wars

                                                        Synopsis:
                                                        In an era where only games and gamers matters, a hardcore gamer Light Gun, finally manages to borrow the most popular game in the world from a friend. Skipping class to visit the simulation room where advance games and virtual reality comes to life, Gun just installs the game and the whole world changes with it. Why was he in a room with people?

                                                        "Welcome to Invasion Wars where the weak is prey and the strong is predators. Have fun invading and don't forget this hint, never let the prey go. Bye! Bye!"

                                                          MasterRabbink wow. I can’t believe people actually fell for it. I'm Nigerian, but I've never seen a prince in my twenty years of life. Nigerian prince their mother, humph

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