The_dark_rose14

Thanks, Rose. I will consider what you said about the chapter length and make them a bit shorter πŸ™‚

    Maeve_Lindley
    I'm in. Really liked your reveal at the end of chapter 1, It was done well. WIll read and review. Would appreciate if you could look at mine too πŸ™‚ https://www.webnovel.com/book/eternal-knight_27123642006733305

    It's an urban fantasy set in Scotland (Edinburgh) about a Knight

    P.S. You might want to go through what you've written and look at the tenses. You switch from past to present tense and back again a fair bit. I prefer past tense: I looked, she kicked, rather than present tense: I look, she kicks etc

    Web Novel Novel Ask