Maeve_Lindley
I'm in. Really liked your reveal at the end of chapter 1, It was done well. WIll read and review. Would appreciate if you could look at mine too πŸ™‚ https://www.webnovel.com/book/eternal-knight_27123642006733305

It's an urban fantasy set in Scotland (Edinburgh) about a Knight

P.S. You might want to go through what you've written and look at the tenses. You switch from past to present tense and back again a fair bit. I prefer past tense: I looked, she kicked, rather than present tense: I look, she kicks etc

Osakasan Sure, Lets do a review swap. Im willing to read 5 chaps of yours and give you a review.

Edit: I have read yours and gave a review, Thank you!

    Maeve_Lindley

    Hi Maeve, I've left you a review. Your story is really good! Your characters are well developed, the world is slowly built up, it's really good. Well done πŸ˜„

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