xish101 adding to library, will start reading and commenting first. Will review when I get an understanding of the chapters... cheers..My book's link is at the top.

    xish101 As you can see, I am looking for someone who will read the whole book. It's already finished. So, review chapter by chapter at the end of it or you can come and post your thoughts here. You can take your time and I will do the same to yours. when you are done with the book, you can review it.

      ToufiqUlAlam i have started reading yours as well. Here are the biggest issues

      1 chapters quickly drag with nothing interesting happening
      2 thinks that are interesting gets ruined by the lack of excitement

      3 narration is terrible. That is the first thing you should fix when writing

      Summary- is very boring so far, and the reader doesn't sumptuous with a character just because you tell them to. Fix those big issues

      I didn't know we were only sharing negative critiques lol
      If i did then i would prob nit have done rhis. But since u already posted on my book, i'll do urs as well💅

          xish101 review is done...but reading is not...I will keep reviewing chapter wise..plz do the same thanks.

            KingVinito starting yours too...will take some time but expect collections and comments in the meantime.
            and please, do the same for me...don't just say you liked or didn't like it...you should mention where I can change. Give me constructive instructions...thanks. My book is at the top of the thread.

                ToufiqUlAlam

                I would love to beta read your book where I'll give some comments, feedbacks, and even review. But if you don't mind an Action Sci-Fi with lots of action scene, you would love this book.

                Title: Scorching Black Vulture

                Synopsis:
                The scorching virus outbreak plunged the Galean planet's ecosystems into lunacies. No antidotes are effective in countering this tiny virus, as it also infected the advanced technologies.

                The entire Galean organization, including Minerva, has to combat this virus on any occasion by creating the Authonoid, which stands for Authorized Android.

                They aimed to combat the scorching virus while heavily immunized them. Unfortunately, this virus was constantly developing each time.

                And to make matters worse, some elites were exploiting this virus by profiting it to fulfilling their political agendas.

                Tsuyuki is the Minerva's Authonoid, and with his friends, he has to fight against the continuous outbreak, political unrest, and many unforeseen threats.

                Link:
                https://www.webnovel.com/book/scorching-black-vulture_22073496706380905

                    MansonFD7 Hello there! Beta readers are always welcome. You can find my book's link in the original post.

                        ToufiqUlAlam hey! I just wanted to say that you can stop reading mine if you would like. I can't continue reading yours because, to put it bluntly, its not that interesting to me. I'll write a review for it so far, but U'm not doing any more comments. I'll replicate the same review you do for mine. Thanks

                            MansonFD7 It is indeed shady, what you give to them was permanent licensing agreement, not transfer of copyright. it is still possible to terminate the contract and revoke the license, but the editor is only the one who decide whether to terminate or not

                              MansonFD7 hello!! Review is done. please, review mine if you have time. I will continue reading yours but it will take some time.

                                MansonFD7 I still am trying to get a contract...as a writer, money is indeed important and I need at least one commercial success to brag about myself to other publishers...lol...but how did they contact you about the contract? Is there a requirement that you need to fulfill to get their attention?

                                    ToufiqUlAlam author or my stature...? I didn't ssy it was a terrible book, because its not. You have high school level writing skills (thats a good thing!) Which is unique from other writers. I simply didn't think we were making such specific critiques. I tend to allow my professor or signed authors read and critique my book, since they have some knowledge backing their skills. But thank you for your time ig?

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