Check out my novel as well. It is still on the rise
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15057015306724005/Soul-War%3A-Journey-to-a-new-life
It has Magic, system, crafting, adventures and drama but most of all an unusual MC :D
Spajk
- Apr 15, 2021
- Joined Nov 15, 2017
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Check out my novel as well. It is still on the rise
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15057015306724005/Soul-War%3A-Journey-to-a-new-life
It has Magic, system, crafting, adventures and drama but most of all an unusual MC :D
Fairuz_Fiza Ouch, stories that involve rape are really not suitable for me to review. I hope you don't mind.
LostInFictions I will check it out. Just remind me once you write a few more chapters
kazesenken I will check it out
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Yuyumamoru Wow, just wow, I expected copper but I found gold. Your post was exactly What I was looking for. Thank you very much.
1.English is my second language, and one of the reasons I started writing this was in order to improve it. I was aware of some of the things you mentioned but the quotation mark one is really the type of stuff I want to know more about. For example due to limitations, I used ' word ' for thoughts of the characters, and *Word for sounds and noises or even reading.
If you noticed anything that needs correcting and have the time, please let me know.
2. Yes, descriptions, When I read novels I usually only skim (and it shows) through those because I " really need to know what happens next". Now my novel is not there yet, On the other hand I like those vague descriptions like a blond woman in a military outfit because they give the reader just enough information to form a character's look in their mind. When I was writing that I was describing the world from MC's point of view, what I mean is reader knows only the things that MC's notices and understands 'wow a blond woman showed up out of nowhere - lets find out more'. My idea was to introduce the world through MC's eyes, through the way he understands and sees things or things that happen in his vicinity. Overall I need to work on my descriptions since they will improve the quality of the novel immensely.
I don't feel that I am a good writer, this is my first novel ever, only things I wrote before were essays. I do want to improve so I will look into the descriptions of stuff. They will become more colorful with my improvement as a writer and with "MC's understanding of the world".
3. Yes MC's seventy-year-old personality is a work in progress. I do struggle to figure out how my character would react in a way an old man would. How he addresses authority, how he addresses equals and strangers. And almost everyone in the Soul War world is older than him so there is that. Some parts are left out because they would be a spoiler in later chapters. I planned out the major plot points but I struggle in everyday things and descriptions. Wasn't expecting that when I started writing
4. Knowing that my story has potential really means a lot.
Thank you for your effort and the time you took to help me be a better writer. I really appreciate it.I have already posted my review
Here is my novel, Though romance is not primary, The driving force behind MC is love.
Hope you check it out.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15057015306724005/Soul-War%3A-Journey-to-a-new-lifeShinSungmi I will check it out
Abdirah101 I will check it out
BlackCarapace I will check it out
LordSputnik Sure thing!
Hello everyone, I am a new author that started writing his first novel a little over a week ago, I updated us much as possible, but other than a few power stones and collections I haven't really received any feedback on the novel I wrote. I am not sure if anyone is reading it or am I just writing for myself. I did get 1 review that kept me going but that is it. I would like to hear if my novel has potential or should I call it quits and start a new one.
Anyway here it is
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15057015306724005/Soul-War%3A-Journey-to-a-new-life
Tags : Fantasy, System, Adventure, Game elements
Thanks for checking it outHello, I am a new newbie author looking for some feedback on my first novel.
If you check it out please tell me your opinionshttps://www.webnovel.com/book/15057015306724005/Soul-War%3A-Journey-to-a-new-life
Synopsis
After the death of his wife Leon was never the same. He dedicated his life to his grandchildren, and spent the rest of his time mostly in seclusion, hiding his feelings and regrets from the rest of his family.
Now, he is given a chance to right a wrong, and meet his wife again, but the road will not be easy, bordering impossible.
Follow his magical journey, as he tries to overcome a plethora of mythical creatures, heroes and demons alike, as well as other souls in order to fulfill his heart’s only desire.
Hello, I am writing a novel that mostly satisfies your requirements (No beast companions)
It is my first novel and I just started writing it but you can check it out maybe tell me what you think.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15057015306724005/Soul-War%3A-Journey-to-a-new-lifeHello everyone, I am a new author that just started writing his first novel a few days ago. I could really use an honest review in order to improve my writing because English is my second language.
Author: Spajk
Title: Soul War: Journey to a new life
Genre: Fantasy
Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/15057015306724005/Soul-War%3A-Journey-to-a-new-lifeSynopsis
After the death of his wife Leon was never the same. He dedicated his life to his grandchildren, and spent the rest of his time mostly in seclusion, hiding his feelings and regrets from the rest of his family.Now, he is given a chance to right a wrong, and meet his wife again, but the road will not be easy, bordering impossible.
Follow his magical journey, as he tries to overcome a plethora of mythical creatures, heroes and demons alike, as well as other souls in order to fulfill his heart’s only desire.
Thanks for checking it out!
ShinSungmi Well I tried reading your novel and I just couldn't follow the story since it has elements of a different novel that I haven't read. What I noticed is that you should work on your grammar if you want more readers ;)
dapenggaofei I think I managed to fix it on my own, apparently after validating my email credentials once again, the problem disappeared