Nightmare_weaver I'm down for a Review swap. Thanks!
TheSpiderNextDoor
- Apr 25, 2023
- Joined Nov 15, 2018
Hello, if anyone is interested, check out my story!
Title: The undead and her useless Master
Genre: Fantasy
Novel link:https://www.webnovel.com/book/15190257106456405/The-undead-and-her-useless-Master
Synopsis:Many years ago, a girl was cursed after causing a great tragedy. She was cursed to live forever, but that's a good thing, right? After living through most of the traumatic moments in history, and experiencing many painful deaths, she realizes that her curse wasn't just petty dying words from those who hated her. One day, a strange elderly lady gives her a book that enables her to summon Satan, but when the book summons what seems to be a fraud. She comes up with a sinister plan of her own..
(I started this story for a contest so I could gain more experience in writing, but now I don't know if it's good enough to continue.)Allen_Clay012 I have posted my review on your novel "Steel Legion." Keep up the good work!
My collections gone to zero as well. It sucks to see that it wasn't just my side acting strange.
Allen_Clay012 No problem. I have been reading your novel "Steel Legion" while studying for exams. I'll try my best to upload a review by tomorrow.
Allen_Clay012 Okay. Great!
This will be something I will be working on (more realistic and fleshed-out characters). Thank you again for taking the time to go into such elaborateness. I was hoping that I could get a readers' discerning opinion. So I'm very grateful!
Allen_Clay012 Would you like to swap reviews? I don't see a link, so if you have a story, I would be happy to read yours as well.
Sigheti That's fine! I found what you wrote thus far to be extremely helpful. As for me, I'm a slow reader, but I will do my best to read all chapters before writing my review.
Sigheti I'm down for swapping feedback. Thanks!
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Slewis
Feel free to go all out! I'm mostly wanting to know if my story is trash or not. When I'm finished reading yours, I'll leave a review. Thanks!Hello. I'm wondering if anyone would drop some constructive criticism on my story? I'd be more than willing to leave a review/ comment as well!
Author: TheSpiderNextDoor
Title: The undead and her useless Master
Genre: Fantasy
Novel link:https://www.webnovel.com/book/15190257106456405/The-undead-and-her-useless-Master
Synopsis:Many years ago, a girl was cursed after causing a great tragedy. She was cursed to live forever, but that's a good thing, right? After living through most of the traumatic moments in history, and experiencing many painful deaths, she realizes that her curse wasn't just petty dying words from those who hated her. One day, a strange elderly lady gives her a book that enables her to summon Satan, but when the book summons what seems to be a fraud. She comes up with a sinister plan of her own..