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I've reviewed sorcha Knight in the city.
Everything about this story is 5/5 from strictly a judging perspective. Writing is good, updates are stable, there's a story unfolding, characters are unique, and the world background is explained well. However, I just can't seem to get into it. Granted, I've only read five chapters so far. I guess my problem with it is the lack of conflict to create some interest? The chapters are very short though, so perhaps that comes soon after chapter 5.
Final thoughts: I like White Queen Ascending much more =p
existing

- Dec 25, 2020
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@existing SnoozySloth ohohoho... I didn't know I was so popular to my fellow rivals
I read these comments too late... I guess I am the real sloth here..gonna change my name to sloth...xd
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https://inkstone.webnovel.com@existing
I've reviewed White Queen AscendingI'll post my review below for anyone interested:
I love this novel. The MC is awesome and feels like a real person. The world building is very descriptive. I look forward to the future chapters.
Writing Quality 4.5/5: Some minor grammatical mistakes here and there. Nothing major. It shouldn't impact your enjoyment of the novel at all.
Updates 5/5: New novel and already has 4 chapters.
Story Development: 5/5. She has a clear goal. Now she needs to find her path to it =)
Character Design 5/5: MC and her friend are both great! I like them both.
World Background 5/5: The author has great descriptions for the world. I think we'll see it become very fleshed out as chapters continue.Did you know I secretly look at how many chapters you right to know I am on the right track? your book Sorcha Knight in the City is really coming along. I can't wait to see how you evolve as an author next to me. haha since we started around the same time lets be writing rivals :)
Keep up the good work!
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Uhh I guess I should shamelessly post here then. https://www.webnovel.com/book/11490900806393805/I-reincarnated-into-a-harem-game-as-a-villain%2C-Please-stay-away-I'm-gay!
Thanks @existing :)