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SnoozySloth Lol you really think in a fanfic you can write a shitty line like that? It just shows your bias. If you don't think people can imagine what a steampunk mech looks like then you underestimate people.
I can do the same thing.
Johhny enterd his custom mech suite and shot hot water from its hand cannons, because the mech was 10 feet tall it moved clumsily due to its low center of gravity. He had to carefully aim his shots because the water tank on its back was limited, even the timing had to be carefully planned to avoid overheating.
Oh wow, that was so hard to describe....dude doesn't make originals sound hard to write. In my opinion originals are easier to write because you can just make up whatever you want.