I want to know based on the two pages ive written if this is a book someone would read, it kinda has Hero academy vibe but overall my story feels fresh and original to me.
IS MY STORY GOOD OR SHOULD I END IT?
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Link to OPs novel:
SuperFail
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11598545905447305
Hero, my mom was the first hero. Ever. Nothing much has changed since the new era began. Other then police and military acquiring more lethal ways to suppress, and nations disregarding all weapons in exchange for trained heroes. Or at least that was the plan. 17 years later a group stood in order to protect the rights of Sha humans. keeping rder among humans and heroes. Every hero fell in two these 2 categories. (Sha and Zam)
Unfortunately I fell in none, yes I'm powerless. But I don't plan to stay that way."The hero called Shazam has betrayed the Sha society and no one has seen him since he's escape, stay tuned for more details, channel X news." When I was little I had a dream of flying with my mom wearing that exact cape as Shazam....but what can a powerless boy do to show he has what it takes to wear a cape?
DragonKnight531
Hello there, I just saw a familiar name, so I'll leave my opinion.
Short answer: Yes.
Long answer: Regardless of how good your premise may be, you are still not ready to present it. I would recommend spending more time reading, paying close attention to sentence structure, having a good reference on how a book is written will greatly improve your skills.
2 months later
_Mort_ idk how I didn't see this! I'm still getting used to this app, my bad. Thanks!
Dr_Zombie thank you!
benny101 light its to much info? Or light meaning the start doesn't have enough detail? Thanks for commenting
Dont give up because of what other people tell you. Im not sure if anyone criticized you or anything :p but dont feel down if someone does. There are billions of people in the world, many wont like your work but there are surely some who will like it. Its impossible to be loved by all, what you should care is not the ones who dont like your work, but the ones who like it.
You are the master of your own stories and responsible for their progression and conclusion. So, end it if you think its time to end it and continue if you think there is still story to be told.
Your story has just started, so I think there should be a lot left to write about, but the decision is yours...
Anyway, dont be like me who starts writing and gets too lazy to finish :p
If you are going to finish it, make a proper end ;)