After reading through hundreds of posts in this thread, I just realised I made a lot of mistakes in this contest.. I entered on the last day, and I didn't know it was based on vote from other accounts which raise a lot of questions on its credibility. I thought webnovel has a group of people who doing the review.
Anyway, I know I won't be the winner and I'm just looking for people to review my first writing and tell me if I'm doing well or not. I will keep posting the new chapters before deciding whether to continue or give up.. it's a pity though as I really like my novel (even though it's just a hobby of mine in my spare time for now)