Hey guys, I wanted to have your opinions on whether this chapter pulled on any heartstrings, or it was convincingly sad. Opinions would be appreciated.
Chapter 30: Bao'er
Sha Ku's breathing became rapid; he felt like there wasn't enough air in his lungs. He started to sweat heavily, and his vision became a bit blurry, while he felt like he was going to vomit!
He quickly put his head between his legs and tried to calm himself down.
Even An Tang noticed Sha Ku's reaction and was visibly shocked.
He quickly shook Sha Ku, trying to see what was wrong with him.
"Sha Ku, what's wrong, the Nightmare Child is long dead. You couldn't possibly be frightened of a dead thing, could you?!" An Tang burst out laughing.
This infuriated Sha Ku, who swiftly brought his head up and punched An Tang in the gut, causing him to vomit!
"You bastard, don't speak of things you know nothing of! You have no idea how terrifying a Nightmare child is!" Sha Ku's face was pale, starting to tear up a little as well, his voice slightly began to choke.
"Even in the highest heavens, it's not easy to deal with a Nightmare Child! They prey on the souls of children, infecting them, cultivating through them. They curse them with nightmares until they reach the age of eighteen, stealing any talent they had! What's even worse, when the victim of a Nightmare Child reaches adulthood, they'll go on a senseless slaughter!"
"They'll kill their own parents, any lover that they might have. In some cases, even their own children!"
"Worst of all, to kill a Nightmare Child, you have to eliminate everybody it's infected!" Sha Ku gripped his first, as his heart plunged into great pain.
In his eyes, a Nightmare Child needed to be destroyed more so than the Pantheon! They're evil! They should be annihilated!
Sha Ku knew this better than most… he'd lost his only…
"Just buy the fucking egg An Tang, I don't care what the cost is." Sha Ku jumped off of the seats, walking off into the distance as tears trailed down his face.
An Tang could only give a quick nod and wipe the blood from his mouth. He'd never seen Sha Ku lose his cool before. Even when he was a victim of interrogation, he didn't lose his cool; every action was cold and calculated.
Sha Ku stormed off, down a small abandoned alleyway.
"Ahhh!" he screamed, as tears poured from his eyes.
He then let off a roar, as he started to pound his fists against the brick walls of the alleyway.
Bang!
Bang!
Bang!
Bang!
Bang!
Bang!
Bang!
He didn't stop, the banging on the walls just increased, becoming faster and faster.
The blood from his ripped fleshy hands oozed just as fast as the tears in his eyes.
Until he finally fell to his knees, weeping.
"Bao'er… I'm so sorry Bao'er. My little girl." Sha Ku leaned his head against the blood-stained brick wall.
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