Everyone sorry for being late i was out of range i will be paying my dues with reviews on your works

    B_l_a_n_k_2167

    Allen_Clay012

    Review Swap, can you guys read the the last 10 or so chapters starting from my OneNight Arc? I have quite a few chapters and want to understand how my writing is progressing. I'll read the same amount of chapters as you guys do though, preferably leave some comments if you guys see any mistakes, drop your links in response
    [https://www.webnovel.com/book/we-die-young_25589107805343505](https://)

      B_l_a_n_k_2167 yo I read it and left some comments. I don't want to rate your novel low so here's my review

      Well written, nothing particularly wrong but doesn't hook my interest in any particular way, it feels like the author is just describing the scene in an elegant way while sometimes neglecting the tone of a scene or the emotions a character should be feeling in the moment, I like the story premise, with a near apathetic Main Character, but I recommend the author to read or perhaps watch examples like Grand Admiral Thrawn who while apathetic creates an atmosphere of intimidation while not being. a bad guy outright while not being a good guy, sort of a neutral chaos which i think your aiming for with Marshall,

      drop an honest review of my newest three chapters please,

        5 days later

        B_l_a_n_k_2167 I apologize if my review took so long. I will review your work once I am done catching up with my updates.

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